Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated)

[zombielover99]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:hahahaha cause awesomeboo

Yup ;P

[zombielover99]

Updated.

[Metazard]

zombielover99 wrote:Hello It's zombielover99 I would like to apply for mod, I really can't explain in words how much I would LOVE to be mod and considering how nice all of the people on Mctopia are I would love to help others using the commands, I know its alot to ask for yet i feel that i am destined to help mctopians. I have been playing since early september and since fell in love with the server, the people and the amazing perks of being a mctopian. I found this server because 1. My friend told me 2. All the videos on mctopia ( I searched it up). I already do help people but with limmited commands. I don't just think of mod as a rank I think of it as a sign of respect and that is the main reason I actually want mod, yes the commands are nice but respect seems like a sign of friendship. I wouldn't dream of tp killing or spawning items because that's against rules and i havn't ever been jailed so I really wouldn't like to be demoted of a rank. I am well aware of the commands and using them to help others and deal with rule breakers, I would buy SD but I really don't have the money but I would if I could. I have also made many friends like Hicole, Kittens1234, AheadJeffery, DanielG2109, kittycatface, 168Phoenix, Mr.Inspiron (obviously he rocks), Kmario64, Manicman, LordNickolas, Bkreitz, spencerboss, ashball, Silverwolf, ok I think I could go on forever! I asked staff if I would be a good mod and I got a 6/6 these people I asked were Emmylol1, SilverWolf101, Kittens1234, LordNickolas, Challanger and Hicole and they all approved of me! Thats is my mod application and well i hope i get considered.

Thanks your friend- Zombielover99

I've coloured red the things spelt wrong or that need to be capitalized, in blue I put something that is wrong or that needs to be reworded.

My tips are:
1. Try spacing it out, different topics, put them into different paragraphs to make it look better and so it isn't just a massive wall of text.

2. I saw you used number points, this is a good idea, but try putting them in a dot point format like I'm doing my number format

3. Elaborate on the commands section, explain what the commands are, how to use them and when to use them, just so we know you will know what you are doing

Do all this and I'll send in a personal letter of recommendation

[zombielover99]

Metazard wrote:

zombielover99 wrote:Hello It's zombielover99 I would like to apply for mod, I really can't explain in words how much I would LOVE to be mod and considering how nice all of the people on Mctopia are I would love to help others using the commands, I know its alot to ask for yet i feel that i am destined to help mctopians. I have been playing since early september and since fell in love with the server, the people and the amazing perks of being a mctopian. I found this server because 1. My friend told me 2. All the videos on mctopia ( I searched it up). I already do help people but with limmited commands. I don't just think of mod as a rank I think of it as a sign of respect and that is the main reason I actually want mod, yes the commands are nice but respect seems like a sign of friendship. I wouldn't dream of tp killing or spawning items because that's against rules and i havn't ever been jailed so I really wouldn't like to be demoted of a rank. I am well aware of the commands and using them to help others and deal with rule breakers, I would buy SD but I really don't have the money but I would if I could. I have also made many friends like Hicole, Kittens1234, AheadJeffery, DanielG2109, kittycatface, 168Phoenix, Mr.Inspiron (obviously he rocks), Kmario64, Manicman, LordNickolas, Bkreitz, spencerboss, ashball, Silverwolf, ok I think I could go on forever! I asked staff if I would be a good mod and I got a 6/6 these people I asked were Emmylol1, SilverWolf101, Kittens1234, LordNickolas, Challanger and Hicole and they all approved of me! Thats is my mod application and well i hope i get considered.

Thanks your friend- Zombielover99

I've coloured red the things spelt wrong or that need to be capitalized, in blue I put something that is wrong or that needs to be reworded.

My tips are:
1. Try spacing it out, different topics, put them into different paragraphs to make it look better and so it isn't just a massive wall of text.

2. I saw you used number points, this is a good idea, but try putting them in a dot point format like I'm doing my number format

3. Elaborate on the commands section, explain what the commands are, how to use them and when to use them, just so we know you will know what you are doing

Do all this and I'll send in a personal letter of recommendation

Thanks meta so much

[BrookeTheSheep]

*slowly claps*

You could do it, my friend.
Only time shall tell

[Metazard]

zombielover99 wrote:Hello It's zombielover99 I would like to apply for mod, I really can't explain in words how much I would LOVE to be mod and considering how nice all of the people on Mctopia are I would love to help others using the commands, I know its a lot to ask for yet I feel that I am destined to help mctopians.

I have been playing since early september and since fell in love with the server, the people and the amazing perks of being a mctopian. I found this server because
1. My friend told me
2. All the videos on mctopia ( I searched it up).

I already do help people but with limmited commands. I don't just think of mod as a rank I think of it as a sign of respect and that is the main reason I actually want mod, yes the commands are nice but respect seems like a sign of friendship.

I wouldn't dream of tp killing or spawning items because well I know better than that and I haven't ever been jailed so I really wouldn't like to be demoted of a rank. I am well aware of the commands and using them to help others and deal with rule breakers, I would buy SD but I really don't have the money but I would if I could.

I have also made many friends like Hicole, Kittens1234, AheadJeffery, DanielG2109, kittycatface, 168Phoenix, Mr.Inspiron (obviously he rocks), Kmario64, Manicman, LordNickolas, Bkreitz, spencerboss, ashball, Silverwolf, ok I think I could go on forever! I asked staff if I would be a good mod and I got a 6/6 these people I asked were Emmylol1, SilverWolf101, Kittens1234, LordNickolas, Challanger and Hicole and they all approved of me! Thats is my mod application and well I hope I get considered.

Thanks your friend- Zombielover99

Looking a lot better, just need to add the commands but and fix up the bit which says spawning items is wrong to spawning items for other people is wrong.

[zombielover99]

How's this?

[Metazard]

Do ou know how to use /jail?

[zombielover99]

I do now.

[SilverWolf101]

zombielover99 wrote:I don't know
1.how to tell what the jail cell is named (alex...)
2.hoe to jail the person like I think you do /jail (player) (time) but not sure.
I do know
1.the procedure once they're jailed (jail explanations)
2.Appropriate times to jail people.

Check the commands section on the first jailing rank, I think how to do it is there. If not, still check out some other commands jus in case.

Actually I'll do it the easy way. Telling you. Lol. Here it is! : /jail (player name) (cells. Like: 1-10 or waterjail) (time)