REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[GemuFoxxx]

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[SilverWolf101]

GemuFoxxx wrote:im writing!

Wriiiiiite!mgooo AhrI WRIIIIITE

[SilverWolf101]

Note: My characters birthday is in 2 days (In the story)

[tobiii1004]

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR AVI! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!" All of us sang the Happy Birthday song to Avi, who was celebrating her birthday...well...tomorrow. But she wanted cake today and tomorrow...and...well...we couldn't really argue. All of us wanted cake.

Just for presentation, we hadn't lit the candles. That was left to me and Ahri. Ahri used her fox magic to light half of them, while I used a potion of my dragon powers to blow a breath of fire onto them.

With a mighty breath, Avi blew out her candles, which Ahri decorated with miniature feathers. I didn't know where she got the feathers, and I wasn't going to ask. We clapped and clapped. Avi grinned. I cut the cake and handed it to Avi, who crammed it in her mouth hungrily. We laughed. She grinned through her cake-filled beak.

In the midst of celebration, we felt a sad, melancholy hollowness. Colli, Fay, and James were all gone. And where was Mason? I hadn't seen him in forever. There was some new people...but they weren't close enough to be considered family yet. Chives was singing, but I could tell in his empty eyes that when Fay left, a little piece of him was ripped away forever.

A birthday wasn't complete without all the family there.

We sat in silence, enjoying our cake, listening to Avi babble on and on about something she learned. We smiled at her childhood innocence.

Jack, out of the blue, gave her a journal covered in little feathers and pearls. She clapped with delight and hugged him. He was really becoming a big brother to her. I smiled happily. Nothing was better than my family approving of him.

Well, most of the family.

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After the celebration, we had to finish something we started. James was temporarily buried about a foot deep in the snow outside. We were building a coffin for him. I could still hear Fay's cries echoing in my head. The whole family went outside to properly bury him. Chives stayed behind, and Emma did as well to comfort him. Together, we lifted James out of the snow and laid him in the wooden coffin. I heard a soft cry.

FAY?!?!

I looked around, but Fay was nowhere to be seen. I sulked.

We dug a large, deep hole and sent the coffin sliding in. Before they buried it, I stepped up.

"Everyone, I'd like to do this for Fay." I hopped in the hole, and opened the coffin. There was James, looking peaceful and calm. I bit back a tear...we may have gotten off to a rocky start but I think James and I could have been friends.

I removed a long section of red string from my pocked and tied it around James's wrist, then closed the coffin. I held onto it, hopped to the surface, and they began piling dirt over the coffin. Keeping a firm grip on the string, I made sure it didn't slip.

Once the hole was filled, I took a long, sturdy stick. Not a flimsy one, mind you, it was almost like a log. It pretty much was one. There was a little branch sticking off of the log, and I tied the string around it. I connected a bell in such a way that if the string moved, the bell rung.

"I tied the string to James's wrist. Now if he actually isn't dead, he will move about in the coffin. The motion of his wrist will move the string, and ring the bell. So now if we hear the bell, we must dig him up." It sounded odd now that I was saying it.

"For Fay." I said, and walked back to Jack.

[kittens1234]

After I had slept, I thought I might as well leave Cal in his little room, so I had went and celebrated the birthday party.
But When alice and everyone went to burry James, I stayed behind. I had told Alice, "I've watched millions die, and then be berried. I don't need to see another one."
I knew that she knew I wanted to just stay back and be with Chives.
I was sitting on the roof with him, watching the furnnal from above.
"Do you think shes really dead?" He asked me
"No, I smell her..but its faint. I wouldn't be able to track her." I replied, emotionless.
I was begingng to think that my powers were getting weaker, two weeks ago, I would have been able to find her.
But now that I knew Amber wanted to kill me, I was being very careful. That spell making me human hadn't worn off yet either.
"Whats on your mind Emma?"
"Will-Will you help me with something?"
"Sure"
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We walked into my room, and I open up the panel.
Chives gasped "you're keeping a human in here?"
I nodded.
"Can you do magic." It was a statement, not a question.
He shock his head.
"Leave; I'll be out later"
He left.
I sighed. I needed extra magic.
I bit my arm, wincing as blood poured out onto the floor, then watching as I waited for it to heal. It didn't.
What...
I had to do this fast If I wasn't going to heal. I already felt dizzy. I took Cal's arm and bit it, letting his blood spill onto the floor. He moaned.
"Hang in there. Just a few more..."
I felt faint. Very, unatrually faint.
I spat into the blood, and it turned blue.
"Turn this blood, make it stay, turn its DNA, make it one, as is the person."
Cal stirred. His eyes opened. Blood red. Like me.
Hello friend. Remember me Emma?
No, this...
"GET OUT OF MY HEAD AMBER"
I'll find your friend before you do, and all will be lost
I can send a message back.
I know where they all are, I can save them
Yessssssssss, but not daniel, or his family, I have them. I always have
Daniel died 2000 years ago! You made me kill him!
You sure about that?
I saw a image of Daniel, still blonde, but he had red eyes.
He looked straight at me and smiled, fangs and all.

[BrookeTheSheep]

I'm writing!!!!

[SilverWolf101]

Yay! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO AVI! wait that's me. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME! XD
Lol wait where is Sparky?

[BrookeTheSheep]

The next months in the Fairy Tree were nice.
I could do whatever I wanted. I mastered flying, and I can also make some mean cookies. If I multiply the ingredients, I can make them when I am human!
I was with True, and Trust. Happiness gave me my flying lessons. Around the time when it was Avi's birthday, something amazing happened.
Mason told me something.
He said that James is alive.
I burst into tears. I cried for a while, out of pure joy, of course.
I grabbed the cookie recipe, and headed to say goodbye to True, Trust, and Happiness.
'I'll miss you guys! I'll visit, I promise!" I said to them.
After a few tears, and MANY hugs, I was on my way.
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I turned human. It felt odd not having my wings.
I knocked on the door.
"Hello?" I called.
"NO FRICKIN WAY," I heard someone say.
"Helloooo?" I said again, shaking with joy.
"F-Fay?" a small voice said.
"Avi?" I replied.
The door flew open, and little Avi jumped into my arms.
"FAAAYYY!!!!!!" she screamed.
"What!? FAY?!" I heard voices say from upstairs.
Ahri, Emma, and Alice came sprinting downstairs.
"What?! FAY!" they screamed while tackle-hugging me.
"Where were you?!" Ahri asked.
"I was with my childhood friends, at the Fairy Tree, with Mason. OH CRAP. I forgot Mason!" I said, exasperated.
"I missed you! It has been a month for so!" Emma said.
"I missed you too!!" I replied.
Alice gave me a huge hug. She gave me the biggest hug.
"Fay... I have bad news... James. We buried him today." Alice said.
"What the heck!? Dig him up! HE IS ALIVE!" I shouted.
"I don't think he is." Alice told me.
I stomped inside, and grabbed a knife. I cut a slit in my finger. It hurt, and bled.
"Look. I'm not immortal! James is fine!!" I screamed, worried he might run out of air.
"Coli, get the shovels," Ahri commanded.
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"Work, slaves! WORK!" I ordered, trying to lighten the mood by joking.
"Yes master Fay" Ahri said, sticking out her tongue.
While my family was digging, I decided to talk to Chives.
Walking into his room, I saw him sleeping. Only Chives would sleep through something like this.
I noticed James' bed was still there. I guessed Alice moved to me and Coli's room.
"Chives?" I said, to wake him up.
"F-Fay, shh... WAIT FAY?!" he said, springing out of bed.
He embraced me, and I told him everything. He said that James was dead, and I told him about him being alive.
We rushed outside to see James, and help unbury him.
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They were lifting the coffin out of the ground when I came out.
I saw a pounding on the top, and a bell ringing.
I rushed forward and opened the coffin.
James, pale, yet alive, was there. The insides of the coffin were shredded
James had claws, instead of hand.
As soon as he saw me, the claws faded.
We said nothing.
I leaned forward and wrapped my arms around him. He did the same to me. I sat there, sobbing, while James was still half in the coffin.I leaned back and kissed him, still crying.
Ahri and Emma carried James into his room, but I didn't let go of his hand.
They lay him down on his bed. He sat up, and I sat next to him, tears running down my face.
"Don't you EVER do that again." I told him.
"I won't, Fay," James said.
I kissed him again, then put my head on his shoulder. He had his arms tightly around me, like a protective force field.
I noticed Ahri, Emma, and Chives standing there.
Ahri was fighting back tears, while Chives had his arm around Emma.
Wow. When did THAT happen? It is so cute!
Things couldn't be better.

All was well.

[Metazard]

And for all people that don't know, Haley is hailstorm2424. Although most people know haha

[SilverWolf101]

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