REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[BrookeTheSheep]

Gemu has to write about WHAT scares them away

[tobiii1004]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:I skipped ahead to after the battle.
Basically SOMETHING scared everyone away.

T'was ALICE, in her roaring dragon form!!! :3

[GoldenLynx54]

I dont find ya Brooke. I THOUGHT I would find you, but probably end up lost and scared. =3

[GemuFoxxx]

I Heard the army outside while i was teaching colli magic. she HAD advanced a lot, i think the is ready. i gathered up fay, colli, and the others. leaving avi inside. and we went outside to meet the army. courage fear and fortitude were in the front. on our side, we had me, Emma, Colli, and Chives.
"Hello there! are you here to offer cosmetics from Avon?" i said, giggling a bit at my joke. even though this wasn't a time to be joking, it was in my nature.
"I see you are confident, even though you only have 4 people." Courage scoffed. "We are here to take Purity back. this environment is too dangerous for her."
"That isn't her name courage, her name is Fay. and you will have a job taking her back. she just got up and dissapeared!" i said to him Emma stepped forward
"did you come here to chit-chat? or is your army afraid of us?" Emma said with a smile
"I wouldn't be so haughty LEECH, the battle hasnt happened yet." fear scoffed at her. courage, fortitude, and fear advanced back behind their army. and they commanded the army to charge forward.~

the army charged forward, and colli and chives met them fighting, colli shielded chives and started firing at them. they seemed to be doing good so far, they already took out 2 or 3 of them. me and emma bounded over the army, flying twords the three leaders.
"You handle courage for a bit, ill handle fear!" emma said to me. i nodded at her, and i exploded into fire, foxfire form activated. i was ready for them now. emma brandished her teeth in a smile, and made clawing motions with her hands as we separated ways. i cast my charm on courage, he wouldnt be doing much yet. i activated fox fire, and dashed twords fortitude. my the foxfires hit her, and i dashed once more. i sent my orb flying at her, she was stunned. she hadnt grasped what had happened yet. i dashed once more, and the orb hit her on the way back and she fell. shame, wasnt much of a fight. but then again, she wasnt really the fighter of the group. i used my last dash, to get away from courage. the charm was off of him, and he would be in a blind rage. and my spells were on cooldown... i looked over at emma. she was winning the battle with fear, she was clawing him faster than seemed possible. she stopped clawing him and started drinking his blood. the way vampires fought truly WAS terrifying, but it had lost its effect on me, i also eat people. i decided to run over to her.
"Hey! dont drink all of his blood, i dont like dry liver!" i joked at her. i sent my orb at him, and i started draining his soul. fay's kind were very strange, but delicious at the same time. they were like honeyed ham, rather than the usual chicken that humans tasted like. after we were done eating, i gestured over to courage. who was charging at me.
"will you help me with him? my charm is still on cooldown, and i dont think i can take him alone" i said, bored.
"im sorry ahri, i have to go take care of some buisness, you can handle him!" and she ran away, faster than light. i dashed through courage, and he got confused of where i was, but felt the magic of me hitting him. my fire hit him. i cast my charm on him once again, and sent my orb at him and let the rest of my fires him him while he was charmed. i had two dashes left. the charm wore off soon, but he was a bit worse for the wear. i dashed out of the way of his slow attacks, hitting him with magic. and i dashed one more time, and he fell. i didnt have time to eat his soul though, the others were in a bit of trouble. we hadnt noticed before, chives was wounded, and the soldiers were advancing on them. suddenly, avi burst through the window, riding on Alice, in firey dragon form. she was laughing and cheering. i watched, horrified as Alice descended onto the soldiers, shooting flames at them through her mouth. then i saw, avi was shooting flames too! little fireballs forming in her hands and shooting at the soldiers.
"AVI! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?!!?!!?!?!!" i shouted
"Saving our family, ahri!" she shouted back. and with a shock, i realized she was right. if she hadnt come chives and colli would have fallen. i wouldnt be able to get there in time. I started to pick off the rest of the soldiers, there was only about 25 left. they started to realize they wouldnt win the battle, and retreated. we let them go, they can go ahead and re-breed their tribe, i would feel bad if their kind went extinct. at-least they wont give us any more trouble.
END OF BATTLE.

[tobiii1004]

GemuFoxxx wrote:I Heard the army outside while i was teaching colli magic. she HAD advanced a lot, i think the is ready. i gathered up fay, colli, and the others. leaving avi inside. and we went outside to meet the army. courage fear and fortitude were in the front. on our side, we had me, Emma, Colli, fay, James, and Chives.
"Hello there! are you here to offer cosmetics from Avon?" i said, giggling a bit at my joke. even though this wasn't a time to be joking, it was in my nature.
"I see you are confident, even though you only have 6 people." Courage scoffed. "We are here to take Purity back. this environment is too dangerous for her." Fay stepped ahead.
"That isn't my name courage, my name is Fay. people seem to be confusing my name a lot lately..." she said confidently to him
"God, look at yourself purity! you're a completely different person..." courage said to her "Come back pure" fay's expression changed to angry
"This change is for the better." she replied. Emma stepped forward
"did you come here to chit-chat? or is your army afraid of us?" Emma said with a smile
"I wouldn't be so haughty LEECH, the battle hasnt happened yet." fear scoffed at her. courage, fortitude, and fear advanced back behind their army. and they commanded the army to charge forward.~

the army charged forward, and colli, fay, and james met themm fighting wildly. they seemed to be doing good so far, they already took out 2 or 3 of them. me and emma bounded over the army, flying twords the three leaders.
"You handle courage for a bit, ill handle fear!" emma said to me. i nodded at her, and i exploded into fire, foxfire form activated. i was ready for them now. emma brandished her teeth in a smile, and made clawing motions with her hands as we separated ways. i cast my charm on courage, he wouldnt be doing much yet. i activated fox fire, and dashed twords fortitude. my the foxfires hit her, and i dashed once more. i sent my orb flying at her, she was stunned. she hadnt grasped what had happened yet. i dashed once more, and the orb hit her on the way back and she fell. shame, wasnt much of a fight. but then again, she wasnt really the fighter of the group. i used my last dash, to get away from courage. the charm was off of him, and he would be in a blind rage. and my spells were on cooldown... i looked over at emma. she was winning the battle with fear, she was clawing him faster than seemed possible. she stopped clawing him and started drinking his blood. the way vampires fought truly WAS terrifying, but it had lost its effect on me, i also eat people. i decided to run over to her.
"Hey! dont drink all of his blood, i dont like dry liver!" i joked at her. i sent my orb at him, and i started draining his soul. fay's kind were very strange, but delicious at the same time. they were like honeyed ham, rather than the usual chicken that humans tasted like. after we were done eating, i gestured over to courage. who was charging at me.
"will you help me with him? my charm is still on cooldown, and i dont think i can take him alone" i said, bored.
"Dont worry ahri, we got him!" i grabbed her hand, she threw me twords him. i dashed through him, and he got confused of where i was, but felt the magic of me hitting him. emma was there in an instant, like a shadow. she started clawing at him as my fire hit him. she smmoned a circle of dark magic around him. when it hit him, it gave her a shield, deflecting his blows. with the combined power of both of us, courage fell soon. but we didnt have time to feast on him yet, the others were in a bit of trouble. we hadnt noticed before, james was wounded, and the soldiers were advancing on them. suddenly, avi burst through the window, riding on sparky. she was laughing and cheering. i watched, horrified as sparky descended onto the soldiers, shooting flames at them through his mouth. then i saw, avi was shooting flames too! little fireballs forming in her hands and shooting at the soldiers.
"AVI! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?!!?!!?!?!!" i shouted
"Saving our family, ahri!" she shouted back. and with a shock, i realized she was right. if she hadnt come james and fay would have fallen. me and emma wouldnt be able to get there in time. me and emma started to pick off the rest of the soldiers, there was only about 25 left. they started to realize they wouldnt win the battle, and retreated. emma started to chase after them, but i grabbed her shoulder.
"Let them go, emma. let them rebuild their tribe. it would be a shame to let such a tasty race be annihilated, now wouldn't it emma?"~
END OF BATTLE.

YOU DIDN'T MAKE IT TIE IN WITH WHAT I WROTE!!!! XD

[GemuFoxxx]

SHHHH XD you told me to fit it in with what you wrote AFTER i wrote the whole freaking chapter! xD

[tobiii1004]

GemuFoxxx wrote:SHHHH XD you told me to fit it in with what you wrote AFTER i wrote the whole freaking chapter! xD

BUT NOW OUR CHAPTERS CLASH!!!!

[BrookeTheSheep]

JAMES "DIED" AND I WAS GONE BY THEN.
AND IT DOESN'T FIT WITH TOBBIIIIIII'S STORY
gah

[tobiii1004]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:JAMES "DIED" AND I WAS GONE BY THEN.
AND IT DOESN'T FIT WITH TOBBIIIIIII'S STORY
gah

EXACTLY.

james needs to be "DEAD"

Alice needs to explode in a fiery dragon form.

[challenger410]

i thought james was in a coma?