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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
ok time to get me back in the story xD poor mason feels so left out, lol. ill just say i was exploring again._.

There was a rush of cold, bitter wind. I wasn't too cold, but the poor animals looked freezing. You know how sometimes, on those horrible cloudy days, the sun peeks from the clouds? You have me to thank for that.
The hue on the snow, caused by the bright sunlight, let a soft salmon color. salmon.... I'm hungry now. There was a river down the ravine. It seemed familiar. I run too it, and I get a drink of water. The crisp taste of it rushed threw my body. It was fresh from the mountains, from snow that melted. spring is coming. I rush home. Then I stop. I stop to think about what I just said. 'I rush home.' My home. i never called it that before. I ran faster. I needed to see my brother, but first I need to find why this is all happening. Why did that river seem so familiar? Why the sudden urge to see my brother.
I see something rush across the sky. fairies.
I see her... its purity, my sister. sister
i run off to tell my family, but ive been struck by something. dark magic. i fall to the ground. limp, and near death. i sleep
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Good ChallMaster! YOU ARE A GOOD WRITUR.
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
challenger410 wrote:ok time to get me back in the story xD poor mason fills so left out, lol. ill just say i was exploring again._.

There was a rush of cold, bitter wind. I wasn't too cold, but the poor animals looked freezing. You know how sometimes, on those horrible cloudy days, the sun peeks from the clouds? You have me to thank for that.
The hue on the snow, caused by the bright sunlight, let a soft salmon color. salmon.... I'm hungry now. There was a river down the ravine. It seemed familiar. I run too it, and I get a drink of water. The crisp taste of it rushed threw my body. It was fresh from the mountains, from snow that melted. spring is coming. I rush home. Then I stop. I stop to think about what I just said. 'I rush home.' My home. i never called it that before. I ran faster. I needed to see my brother, but first I need to find why this is all happening. Why did that river seem so familiar? Why the sudden urge to see my brother.
I see something rush across the sky. fairies.
I see her... its purity, my sister. sister
i run off to tell my family, but ive been struck by something. dark magic. i fall to the ground. limp, and near death. i sleep

MASON IT'S NOT A GOOD TIME TO FALL ASLEEP. THERE IS SOMETHING DARK AND MAGICALLL


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Wolfy AWAAAY!
btw, now i WANT you to leave mason out of it. i need him to do something so i can link my story line, to the main plot line. so unless someone wants to help me do that(tobiii or brooke, because they are really good at fixing what i do wrong in this story xD) , leave me arrrrrrooonnneeeee!!
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Okay, how about you get lost in the woods, and find the tree where the fay live? And we take you in, feed you, and heal you. And you think you recognize me. then we both go back to the home when I hear a message from james

Kay?

GOODBYE

BrookeTheSheep wrote:Okay, how about you get lost in the woods, and find the tree where the fay live? And we take you in, feed you, and heal you. And you think you recognize me. then we both go back to the home when I hear a message from james

Kay?

that might work, but ill pm you something else. i dont wanna spoil the story for everyone
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challenger410 wrote:
BrookeTheSheep wrote:Okay, how about you get lost in the woods, and find the tree where the fay live? And we take you in, feed you, and heal you. And you think you recognize me. then we both go back to the home when I hear a message from james

Kay?

that might work, but ill pm you something else. i dont wanna spoil the story for everyone

kk

GOODBYE

I woke up in a small wooden room.
Yawning, I got up, and walked through a door. I saw Trust standing there.
"FAY!" Trust screamed.
"TRUST!" I hollered back.
Trust gave me a big hug.
"I'm so glad you are awake. Do you remember anything?" he said.
"Yeah. The battle, Alice becoming a dragon, and..." I gulped, "James."
"Ok. You just woke up, I should pressure with decisions now. Come downstairs, I'll make you some tea," Trust suggested.
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After four cups of tea, and two muffins, Trust asked me a big question.
"Fay, you have a choice to make. You can stay here, and live life as a fairy, and try to forget, or... Or you can go back to your home."
I knew he was going to ask me something like this. James was dead. I was immortal again. I could live here forever, and try to forget him, and my family. I've only known them for around 6 months. I would miss them... I could spy on them as a fairy if I stayed here. Maybe bring them food at night, or mend clothes, like elves do in fairy tales. Haha, fairy tales. Get it?
Anyway, going back would mean dealing with James' death, but it would also mean seeing my family.
CHIVES.
I forgot about him! HOW COULD I FORGET ABOUT MY BROTHER!?
"Trust, I'm staying. But I have to be able to check up on my family when I want to."
"Ok, that fine!" Giving me another hug, Trust said, "It is good to have you back, Puri- Fay."
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When I got to the house, I saw it in surprisingly good shape. The roof had a burned hole in it, but it was ok.
I flew inside to eavesdrop.
"I think Fay is dead." Ahri said, "At least, thats what Fear told us. We will never know if he was lying or not, because Alice sent them running."
"I might be able to save James..." said Ahri.
I was very surprised. He wasn't dead?
"..but he is in a coma, and probably will never wake up."
Oh.
"Chives, what do you think?"
Chives!
"Fay... Fay..."
Avi whispered something in Ahri's ear. I flew a bit closer to listen.
"Chives hasn't said anything but that since Fay died. I'm worried." Avi whispered.
At that point, I decided to talk to Chives that night.
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GOODBYE

GoldenLynx54 wrote:Who. Is. CAL?

A HUMAN.
Sitting Next to me, while I'm half dead in a pool of ash and blood.
ask for help

xoxoxo
but WHO IS HE? I KNOW he's a human, but WHERE did he come from?
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!


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