2012-11-24, 01:59 PM
I WANNA WRITE.
GOODBYE
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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
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2012-11-24, 01:59 PM
BrookeTheSheep wrote:I WANNA WRITE. Write!
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2012-11-24, 02:32 PM
(THIS IS THE NIGHT BEFORE ALICE COMES)
It was around 4 AM. I needed a break. I tiptoed across the hallway, and into the boy's room. Poking James in the cheek, I whispered "James. James. James" "Wha-" he mumbled, "Oh hi, Pure." I grabbed his hand, and dragged him out of bed. "Pure. Give me a second to make myself decent." He whispered. I looked at my shorts, tank top, and messy hair. "I will too." Dashing into my room, I grabbed my hair, and threw it into a messy braid. I decided to stay in my shorts and tank top, because I didn't think it was that cold out. I gently knocked on James' door, careful not to wake Chives. James opened the door, in jeans and an undershirt. His hair was still a mess, but i didn't care. Grabbing his hand, I told him, "We are going on the roof" "How will we get there? I can try to turn you into a hummingbird again, but it isn't easy" he said. "We climb. There are plenty of vines" I replied. We tiptoed downstairs, well, at least I did; I doubted James would tiptoe. Running to the back of the house, James lifted me up to help me get my footing. We both didn't have shoes or socks, and I was a bit cold. I was halfway up, when my foot slipped. James caught me, and balanced me. When I got to the roof, James was right behind me. We sat there, looking at the stars for while. We laid on our backs, my head on James' chest. I couldn't be any happier. I didn't care about anything up there. It was just us. I didn't care about my purity, my immortality. All I cared about was James. When he kissed me, my insides melted. I felt lightheaded, and I didn't know why. "Oh, yeah. I need to remember to breathe. " I thought to myself. "Chives is going to kill me" James whispered. "Yes he will." I replied. "I don't care," James said. After a little while, I felt funny. All tingle-ly. I shimmered, and gold sparkly things fell from me. I floated in the air. All i saw was gold light. "Purity. You have found your True One. Be forever happy." a deep voice said. I quickly fell to the ground, but James caught me. "Well, its official," James said, "We were made for each other." We stayed on the roof the whole night. My head was on his chest, and James was playing with my hair while humming some song for hours. It was perfect. We were perfect. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ GOODBYE 
2012-11-24, 02:44 PM
Ok. AMAZING CHAPTER/PART!
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis
Herro fwends. Love you <3 Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore! 
2012-11-24, 02:50 PM
The bird girl and I stared in each other's eyes for one confusing second.
She beamed and screamed, "ALICE!" For a split second, she looked at Jack. "Who's this?" "My boyfriend." I responded. Was this the bird girl I needed to find? Glancing down at my pendant, I saw it was glowing a deep ruby red. I gasped excitedly. "You're Avi, aren't you!" Her face fell. "Don't...don't you remember me?" I was so bewildered. "Should I? I know you're a Spirit Land traveler." Tears pooled in her eyes. "No, no, no..I'm more than that! I'm Avi! Your favorite bird girl!" She began to get hysterical. I shushed her. "Shhh..calm down..." I grabbed Jack's hand. "Now how do you remember me?" I tried to uncover these lost memories. "Colli found you in the s-snow...and you came in. You sat by the fire as a little bunny, we didn't know you were a girl...and your name is Alice and you're my big sister!" She sobbed, cries and tears puncturing the sentences and words she tried to form. I didn't remember any of this. "Well, take me to the house you kept me in." She sniffled. "You mean, your home?" She buried her face in her hands. I was confused. "Yes, there." Avi lead me through the portal.
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2012-11-24, 02:50 PM
BrookeTheSheep wrote:I floopin' LOVE writing fluff. ikr isnt it fun!!!! :3
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2012-11-24, 02:54 PM
My turn
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2012-11-24, 02:56 PM
i lead Alice back home along with her BF and Sparky. When we arrived when i opened the door i screamed
"GUYS!!!! ALICE!!!!!" "what?!" "Alice?!" "We missed you!" The house was drowned with shrieks of joy, except one thing. She didnt remember a thing. "alice why cant you remember me?" I I asked her. My eyes filling with tears. She thought for a moment. "The FantasyLand." Its short. My writers block came back D:
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