REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[kittens1234]

GOOD

[BrookeTheSheep]

I woke up in James' room. Again. I tried to sit up, but I had a pounding headache.
"Ugh. This will take a while to heal" I mumbled.
"Pure?" James called from the hallway, "Are you awake?"
"Yeah..." I said.
James ran in the room, badly bruised.
"Oh my god... What happened to you?" I said to him, shocked.
"Your kidnappers sure put up a fight. Everyone used fire spells, and well... I got hit by one" James said. He sat on the edge of the bed.
"Where? Who hit you?" I asked.
"Um, Ahri did. But she doesn't know she hit me. She is mad enough at herself, no need to make her feel worse. It's on my shoulder. I was a bear, and I tried to attack the men. Pure... They got away. And they know where you live now. You need to be extra careful." he told me.
"Lemme see," I said, pulling his arm closer. I rolled up his sleeve and gasped. It was bad. Definitely infected.
"You HAVE to tell Ahri. This could kill you. You... you can't die." I cried.
James said, "No... I can no-"
"AHRI!!!!" I screamed. "HELP!"
James shook his head, and laughed. Brushing back my hair, he said "A bit overprotective"
Ahri zoomed inside.
"Pure, ohmigosh, and you ok?" she worried.
"I'm ok, but James isn't. You hit him with a fire spell" I told her.
"IDIOT. I'M AN GODDAMNED IDIOT." I screamed, "I can't believe how STUPID I am!"
"I. Don't. Care. FIX HIM" I shouted, starting to cry.
"Shh... Pure calm down... I'm fine..." James said. His face was pale. I felt his forehead.
"James, you are burning up. Lie down." I commanded. I scooted over, and James sat next to me.
"Ok. This will take a few days, and it will hurt. My fire spells are meant to kill." Ahri said.
I buried my head in James' chest, and he put his good arm tightly around me. Ahri started to clean out the wound, and James was clearly in a lot of pain. He held me tighter.
After around an hour, Ahri left, so James could prepare for the next round of healing.
I went to get water, when james pulled me back down.
"Stay. Please." he managed to say.
So I did. We lay there for around 10 mins before I fell asleep.

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I awoke the next day still in James' arms. Ahri came back in and brought us breakfast.
"I'll do another round." Ahri said.
It was like that for 3 days. James never let go of me. The days were long, and painful. The nights were cold, and peaceful.
I realized in those 3 days that I unconditionally loved James.

[GemuFoxxx]

im writing!

[BrookeTheSheep]

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[kittens1234]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:I woke up in James' room. Again. I tried to sit up, but I had a pounding headache.
"Ugh. This will take a while to heal" I mumbled.
"Pure?" James called from the hallway, "Are you awake?"
"Yeah..." I said.
James ran in the room, badly bruised.
"Oh my god... What happened to you?" I said to him, shocked.
"Your kidnappers sure put up a fight. Everyone used fire spells, and well... I got hit by one" James said. He sat on the edge of the bed.
"Where? Who hit you?" I asked.
"Um, Ahri did. But she doesn't know she hit me. She is mad enough at herself, no need to make her feel worse. It's on my shoulder. I was a bear, and I tried to attack the men. Pure... They got away. And they know where you live now. You need to be extra careful." he told me.
"Lemme see," I said, pulling his arm closer. I rolled up his sleeve and gasped. It was bad. Definitely infected.
"You HAVE to tell Ahri. This could kill you. You... you can't die." I cried.
James said, "No... I can no-"
"AHRI!!!!" I screamed. "HELP!"
James shook his head, and laughed. Brushing back my hair, he said "A bit overprotective"
Ahri zoomed inside.
"Pure, ohmigosh, and you ok?" she worried.
"I'm ok, but James isn't. You hit him with a fire spell" I told her.
"IDIOT. I'M AN GODDAMNED IDIOT." I screamed, "I can't believe how STUPID I am!"
"I. Don't. Care. FIX HIM" I shouted, starting to cry.
"Shh... Pure calm down... I'm fine..." James said. His face was pale. I felt his forehead.
"James, you are burning up. Lie down." I commanded. I scooted over, and James sat next to me.
"Ok. This will take a few days, and it will hurt. My fire spells are meant to kill." Ahri said.
I buried my head in James' chest, and he put his good arm tightly around me. Ahri started to clean out the wound, and James was clearly in a lot of pain. He held me tighter.
After around an hour, Ahri left, so James could prepare for the next round of healing.
I went to get water, when james pulled me back down.
"Stay. Please." he managed to say.
So I did. We lay there for around 10 mins before I fell asleep.

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I awoke the next day still in James' arms. Ahri came back in and brought us breakfast.
"I'll do another round." Ahri said.
It was like that for 3 days. James never let go of me. The days were long, and painful. The nights were cold, and peaceful.
I realized in those 3 days that I unconditionally loved James.

Did you read my chapter?
D:
Or Chall's
Or Metas?
If so where do this fit?

[BrookeTheSheep]

Well, there are 3 plot lines. They do intersect.
-Dragon thing
- Emma/Chives
- Pure/James

I'm writing for Pure/James.
And i didn't see your chapter, but I read it and it doesn't clash with it.

[kittens1234]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:Well, there are 3 plot lines. They do intersect.
-Dragon thing
- Emma/Chives
- Pure/James

I'm writing for Pure/James.
And i didn't see your chapter, but I read it and it doesn't clash with it.

Mkay!
Thanks its a bit confullzing.

[BrookeTheSheep]

I'll write a mini-chapter!

[kittens1234]

YAY!
Someone needs to help me. I'm passed out on the stairs, and I hit my head on the WOODBanister. >.<

[BrookeTheSheep]

"Where is Chives?" I asked James after he was recovered.
"Umm... I'll show you" James said.
He walked me to my room, where I saw a badly injured Chives laying on my bed.
"Chiivveess. You need to stop getting in trouble! I don't like blood stains on my bed." I told him, giggling. I knew Chives was fine, because although he could feel pain, he healed VERY quickly, and could never die because he was immortal. (YOU GUYS NEED TO REMEMBER THIISSS)
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"Ahri?" I said.
"Yeah?" She replied
"Since Alice is... well... gone.... could Chives stay in her bed?" I asked
"Sure, whatever" she replied.
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ROOM SETUP
Three Rooms
Room 1- James, Mason, Chives (used to be Alice)
Room 2-Pure, and Avi (Only has two people because a part of the room is cut off with the chimney)
Room 3- Emma, Coli, and Ahri

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