REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[tobiii1004]

lol chall's mad at me because i kissed him then started dating Jack C:


ILL NEVER GIVE UP ON JACK!!!! lol i love his character...i think it's gonna be a good story.

[challenger410]

v=I will never fall for Ahri's deceiving, flirtatious powers ever again. She messed with my mind once, and I made sure its impossible for such things to repeat themselves. I returned to the home after being gone for 24 days. nearly a month, and no one seemed to care! Nobody except James, who brought me home after he found me out cold in the unforgiving snow. The frost blanketing my face, he rushed me back. You may blame it on me being hungry, or dehydrated, but the dragons left enough scraps for me to rummage through and eat as much as I wanted. I melted some snow under the fire for me to drink. So why did I pass out you ask? I found exactly what I needed to surpass Ahri's magic. While gazing through her mind, I found her weakness. I found if I ate this special flower, that most people avoid to to the fact that eating it causes instant paralysis, you will be immune to her deceptive magic. If i was to return to the house, I HAD to do it. I wasn't going to risk being deceived again. Before I ate the dangerous vegetation, I did something special. something only my brother could ever understand. I used my powers to make lightning strike 1,2,3 miles away from the house. I then lit a fire, that made plenty of smoke. i ate the flower, and let James do the rest. I was at the home. being awakened by even more newcomers, Chives and Emma.
The ones my brother and I must avoid...

[Metazard]

Chives will hit meta on the head with a frying pan for being with pure then James will hit him back. Emma will then bite James for hurting chives. And that is why xD

[tobiii1004]

Metazard wrote:Chives will hit meta on the head with a frying pan for being with pure then James will hit him back. Emma will then bite James for hurting chives. And that is why xD

And Talon, against her will, will haunt y'all just saying :3

[SilverWolf101]

Well. What Happened to Brooke happened to me. They ignored mah chapter 3:
Oh well. I don't wanna write. I'll just wait

[kittens1234]

No one write! Ima write now!

[SilverWolf101]

kittens1234 wrote:No one write! Ima write now!

Yay!

[kittens1234]

I saw Mason come home covered in frost. I didn't even realize he was gone. Oh well, I'll apologize to him later.
After I had gone hunting, I felt much better. My eyes no longer glowed red, and I could breathe straight. I found chives in the forest on my way home. He was tracking something. He still looked a little beat up from when Ahri taught him a lesson. When I said I could heal him, he refused. I frowned. I followed him for a little bit, But when he started to shake from exhaustion, I told him he had to go home. While we walked home, he had to lean on me. I said nothing, on the inside I was smiling. When we got into the foyer, I smelled mason and James. Ah. They can help me. I didn't think that chives would listen. For me to have him go to bed. I couldn't smell pure anywhere.
"James, can you come down here?"
I don't think I've ever talked around chives before. He stared in aw at me when I talked. I wonder why.
When James came down, chives just stares at him. When James waled up to help me carry chives up the stairs, he slapped James! Then James made a mistake. He punched Chives in the gut. He dubbed over, they passed out. I snarled. James backed up, knowing the mistake he had just made. I gently laid Chives down on the ground, then ran around James in a circle. Once I had confused him, I slapped his face. He fell to the ground unconious. I knew pure would never forgive me for killing him. So I just drank enough blood of his to have the same amount of his strength, then used it to get chives up the stairs into purse room. She still wasn't there, so I layedchives down on her bed. I then healed him, but I was exhausted after the healing. I tried to make it down stairs to wake up James, but I collapsed halfway there. I fell down the stairs and hit my head on the wood banister. Everything went black.

[SilverWolf101]

kittens1234 wrote:I saw Mason come home covered in frost. I didn't even realize he was gone. Oh well, I'll apologize to him later.
After I had gone hunting, I felt much better. My eyes no longer glowed red, and I could breathe straight. I found chives in the forest on my way home. He was tracking something. He still looked a little beat up from when Ahri taught him a lesson. When I said I could heal him, he refused. I frowned. I followed him for a little bit, But when he started to shake from exhaustion, I told him he had to go home. While we walked home, he had to lean on me. I said nothing, on the inside I was smiling. When we got into the foyer, I smelled mason and James. Ah. They can help me. I didn't think that chives would listen. For me to have him go to bed. I couldn't smell pure anywhere.
"James, can you come down here?"
I don't think I've ever talked around chives before. He stared in aw at me when I talked. I wonder why.
When James came down, chives just stares at him. When James waled up to help me carry chives up the stairs, he slapped James! Then James made a mistake. He punched Chives in the gut. He dubbed over, they passed out. I snarled. James backed up, knowing the mistake he had just made. I gently laid Chives down on the ground, then ran around James in a circle. Once I had confused him, I slapped his face. He fell to the ground unconious. I knew pure would never forgive me for killing him. So I just drank enough blood of his to have the same amount of his strength, then used it to get chives up the stairs into purse room. She still wasn't there, so I layedchives down on her bed. I then healed him, but I was exhausted after the healing. I tried to make it down stairs to wake up James, but I collapsed halfway there. I fell down the stairs and hit my head on the wood banister. Everything went black.

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[kittens1234]

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