REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[Metazard]

Lord_Nick. wrote:The next day everyone tried to walk outside at the same time, they all got stuck and starved to death. The End, who loved that happy ending?

o.o

[GemuFoxxx]

Metazard wrote:

Lord_Nick. wrote:The next day everyone tried to walk outside at the same time, they all got stuck and starved to death. The End, who loved that happy ending?

o.o

META! WRITE A PART OF THE STORY!!!

[Metazard]

Meta wanted to introduce his new character >.<

It was a cool morning, not to cold, the cold that makes you want to run around in circles, I was being a fox, searching for more rabbits again. Rabbits are all I seem to eat these days, I'd eat other things but there don't seem to be any other animals... Walking through the forest I find a well worn path,
"Animals made this maybe?" I thought to myself as started to wonder how this was made. Wandering along the path I reached a clearing with luscious green grass with a hill under a house (Yeah I think a little backward) a girl with a bunny that was hoping around we're just out side the house.
"FOOD!" I thought to myself,
"And it's not one of those scrawny starved rabbits either..."
As I got closer to te brake in cover I formulated a plan,
"So I run in and take the girls rabbit then run of with it in my jaws.."
I reached the end I the cover, now or never. I tense, then sprint as fast as I possibly can, I was just about to grab the delicious rabbit when BAM, all I can see white, I briefly open my eyes enough to see the girl holding a light orb,
"What!? She was a Mage?! Argh, why didn't I think that through!"
I concentrate my magic and think
"Bear, bear, bear, become a bear!"
I start increasing in size, my paws become large, my teeth grow sharp an long. I open my eyes to see the girl frozen in fright, I stare t the bunny, I can't wait for my next dinner, I haven't had one for five days! I feel myself become weaker with the new to keep my magic flowing into this form,Better finish this now. Then suddenly the rabbit also increases in size turning half human!
"Were you really going to try to eat me?..." says the bunny girl
"Colli," she says to the other girl, "Fetch ahri, quick!"
The girl runs of, proud of saving her friend but worried at not finishing the job
"I don't know who you are but you're not a bear or a fox, you're an animagus."
How did she know what I am?! This girl obviously is very intelligent with magic, obviously considering she too can transform.
I can feel the strain of keeping my bear form up, I'm about to swipe my paw with claws extended, a fateful blow, when out of no where, she smacks my snout. That's it, my form couldn't hold any longer, I slowly shrink back to human, a young male with black hair and blue eyes and a long scar along my left hand.
I pass out as a lady with nine tails, presumably ahri, opens the door and runs out to help bunny girl.

I wake up with a thud as I land on a hard wood floor, landing on my broken left arm and giving off a loud shriek.
"Suck it up." says ahri, obviously enraged at the fact I attacked one of her.. Friends? I can't be sure, for all I know they're cousins.
"Who are you?" asks bunny girl
"None of your business!" I grunt back in return,
Suddenly my hand is ablaze, then back to normal but withered burn marks
"You attack one of my family and then waltz in here and say that, SPEAK WITH RESPECT!" she yells shortly before slapping me. I can feel my sore red cheek throbbing.
A girl walks up from the side of an older boy to ahri and puts her hand on her shoulder humming a tune, ahri instantly loses her anger and everyone but me seems to put on a smile.. Weird.
"Fine," I reply, "My name is James, I have no family currently and not do I remember having one. As your bunny friend figured out I'm an animagus."
"My name is Alice" says bunny girl.
"You look tired," inclined Ahri, "Maybe a nap?" she points her finger at me and instantly I'm asleep.
I wake up at the bottom of the hill at midnight, to weak to move.
"This is it isn't it?" I think to myself, "All those years surviving by myself and ending up dying at the bottom of a hill? Pathetic." I'm too weak to move and pass out again, the sun is a couple meters higher than the horizon. I pass out again and see that te in is lower than before, must have been our for a day at least.

Dear god I hope that family pities me...

[Metazard]

GemuFoxxx wrote:

Metazard wrote:

Lord_Nick. wrote:The next day everyone tried to walk outside at the same time, they all got stuck and starved to death. The End, who loved that happy ending?

o.o

META! WRITE A PART OF THE STORY!!!

Done

[Metazard]

Metazard wrote:Meta wanted to introduce his new character >.<

It was a cool morning, not to cold, the cold that makes you want to run around in circles, I was being a fox, searching for more rabbits again. Rabbits are all I seem to eat these days, I'd eat other things but there don't seem to be any other animals... Walking through the forest I find a well worn path,
"Animals made this maybe?" I thought to myself as started to wonder how this was made. Wandering along the path I reached a clearing with luscious green grass with a hill under a house (Yeah I think a little backward) a girl with a bunny that was hoping around we're just out side the house.
"FOOD!" I thought to myself,
"And it's not one of those scrawny starved rabbits either..."
As I got closer to te brake in cover I formulated a plan,
"So I run in and take the girls rabbit then run of with it in my jaws.."
I reached the end I the cover, now or never. I tense, then sprint as fast as I possibly can, I was just about to grab the delicious rabbit when BAM, all I can see white, I briefly open my eyes enough to see the girl holding a light orb,
"What!? She was a Mage?! Argh, why didn't I think that through!"
I concentrate my magic and think
"Bear, bear, bear, become a bear!"
I start increasing in size, my paws become large, my teeth grow sharp an long. I open my eyes to see the girl frozen in fright, I stare t the bunny, I can't wait for my next dinner, I haven't had one for five days! I feel myself become weaker with the new to keep my magic flowing into this form,Better finish this now. Then suddenly the rabbit also increases in size turning half human!
"Were you really going to try to eat me?..." says the bunny girl
"Colli," she says to the other girl, "Fetch ahri, quick!"
The girl runs of, proud of saving her friend but worried at not finishing the job
"I don't know who you are but you're not a bear or a fox, you're an animagus."
How did she know what I am?! This girl obviously is very intelligent with magic, obviously considering she too can transform.
I can feel the strain of keeping my bear form up, I'm about to swipe my paw with claws extended, a fateful blow, when out of no where, she smacks my snout. That's it, my form couldn't hold any longer, I slowly shrink back to human, a young male with black hair and blue eyes and a long scar along my left hand.
I pass out as a lady with nine tails, presumably ahri, opens the door and runs out to help bunny girl.

I wake up with a thud as I land on a hard wood floor, landing on my broken left arm and giving off a loud shriek.
"Suck it up." says ahri, obviously enraged at the fact I attacked one of her.. Friends? I can't be sure, for all I know they're cousins.
"Who are you?" asks bunny girl
"None of your business!" I grunt back in return,
Suddenly my hand is ablaze, then back to normal but withered burn marks
"You attack one of my family and then waltz in here and say that, SPEAK WITH RESPECT!" she yells shortly before slapping me. I can feel my sore red cheek throbbing.
A girl walks up from the side of an older boy to ahri and puts her hand on her shoulder humming a tune, ahri instantly loses her anger and everyone but me seems to put on a smile.. Weird.
"Fine," I reply, "My name is James, I have no family currently and not do I remember having one. As your bunny friend figured out I'm an animagus."
"My name is Alice" says bunny girl.
"You look tired," inclined Ahri, "Maybe a nap?" she points her finger at me and instantly I'm asleep.
I wake up at the bottom of the hill at midnight, to weak to move.
"This is it isn't it?" I think to myself, "All those years surviving by myself and ending up dying at the bottom of a hill? Pathetic." I'm too weak to move and pass out again, the sun is a couple meters higher than the horizon. I pass out again and see that te in is lower than before, must have been our for a day at least.

Dear god I hope that family pities me...

Bland autocorrect for those mistakes...

[GemuFoxxx]

yay! ill have to edit all of my stories, and call you james instead of chris XD i just wanted an excuse to be flirting with two boys in the story...

[Metazard]

Many thankyous, just say chris had o leave or sonething lol

[GemuFoxxx]

i decided to just edit you out of the first part XD ill somehow make this story fit together, one way or another.

[Metazard]

xD Good luck

[tobiii1004]

O.o you...you...

YOU TRIED TO EAT ME?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!