REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

GoldenLynx54 wrote:Say "I" if you are writing right now!

You posted first. Write now

[GoldenLynx54]

Oh....Ok. One minute >.< I need to dig, dig, dig, dig. lol

[GemuFoxxx]

I!!!!

[SilverWolf101]

GemuFoxxx wrote:I!!!!

Okay

[GemuFoxxx]

MINI-CHAPTER EXTRA

We all sat by the fire, we decided to play cards, because we all LOVED to play uno when there was nothing else to do.
"We have been getting alot of new guests!" I Say to emma.
"First Mason and James," I gestured to Mason, who i was siting next to
"And then alice, and purity," i gestured to them.
"And now Repaire! will it ever stop? we will run out of room soon..."
"It just means our family of outcasts is getting bigger!" Emma replied
"i guess you are right, they fit right in!" i looked at robby next to me "Some seem to fit in more than others" I said in a flirtatious voice to him. to play with him, i unbuttoned his shirt when he wasnt looking
"H-Hey! what are you doing ahri!" Mason said furiously blushing. I giggled

"Some fox girls just want to have fun" i replied and nodded my head twords colli and chris sitting next to eachother. Colli gave me a sly wink and dropped her cards in front of james, just so she could bend over and pick them up in front of him
"Uno!" Alice bursted out in her adorable voice
"Hey! give US a chance to win will ya?" Purity replied, managing to make her voice sound beautiful even when she was angry. Emma laughed
you have won three times alice! cool it" emma said with a smile.

[GemuFoxxx]

i will be posting a serious chapter soon xD i just wanted to post that.

[GoldenLynx54]

Chapter 6?
Still munching on a cold slab of pork, I think about what happened. My pet bunny turned into a girl. My teeth feel as though they are ripping out, this pork is so hard. "Ahri, next time cook the food." I complain. Ahri looks at me sternly. "The house would burn down if I started a fire. This place doesn't a working furnace, Colli." Staring at my feet, I stride up the stairs to my shared room with (Purity?). My ears twitch and shiver in a gust of cold wind coming from a broken window. Grabbing some mud, I seal the window only to make it look odd. Sneaking to my chest of things, I take out my slightly worn book. My diary, I think. Reading over the last time I wrote, I now write about Avi and what she said, and Alice my pet bunny. Quivering, I start to write it out with a small feather dabbed in some ink. "Dear Aurora-" I am interupted as Avi calls to me. "Ask Ahri if I can go outside, Colli!" Stashing my secret treasure, I dash to AVi. "You know what she'll say. 'No, you're too wounded.' Then you'll say, "Oh, I'm fine!" Those words sting me; why was I so mean? Avi looks disappointed but I quickly walk away, guilt churning inside me. I grab one of my old magic books that Ahri gave to me. "Spells and Shape-shifting". Flipping over to a spell, instead of snap-shifting as Ahri forbid me to do, I read what it does. "'Guiding Light Spell: Light your path'". So I start to practice sensing my aura, whatever it was Ahri told me. Concentrating on 'light', I hold my hands out in a small cup. Magical sparks flickered there, but never grew big enough for light. Trying again and again, I get frustrated. "I tried this 50 times in a minute! Why won't it work?!" Panting and seething with angry, I stomp and glance at the book. Step 5: Stay calm. Oops. Calming myself down quickly, I try again. "WOW! I made a light!" A small orb of light hovered above my cupped hands. I run out to tell Ahri.

[Metazard]

Meta has a new character to play as

[GemuFoxxx]

"Ahri!!! Ahri!!!!!" I Hear colli yell exitedly "I did it!!! I DID MAGIC!!!!!" I looked amazed as she came into the room, she has only been practicing for a month! so much talent...
"That is AMAZING! im so happy for you!" I beamed at the orb of light she had in her hands
"But its really hard to keep it up this way, how do you do it so effortlessly?" She asked hopefully
"Well, there are ways to do magic easier, like for example! scince it is hard to channel magic with just your hands, you could transfer the magic into an item." i told her
"An item?" She said confused
"Yes, an item. such as a staff, wand, or baton. or of you wish, an orb" I smiled and played with my orb, bouncing it with my nine tails.
"Ohhh! that explains alot! one time i saw a girl using light magic, she channeled it with a baton!"
I smiled, because i knew exactly who she was talking about.
"Luxanna Crownguard, she is quite famous isnt she? it does make sense, considering how powerfull she is." I stopped myself before i started to babble.
"But anyway, a magic item can be almost anything! i have seen fans, and even a giant book! i have even seen a man named Ryze, he brought back an old type of magic. he tattooed his body with runes, turning his body into a arcane powerhouse! he is quite a nice man, i sould take you to see him sometime... but anyway, magic can come from a million places, it jsut depends on what suits you the best!" Colli listened to every word i said intently.
"How come it doesnt say that in any of my books ahri?" She inquired
"Because most of the magic schools you learned from are very simple minded. they teach you the basics of magic, but nothing too exiting like elements, or supportive magic... they just make you a simple mage. nothing special or unique." Colli thought that over for a minute.
"What is one of the strangest things you have seen in the magical world ahri?" She asked shyly. i thought about that for a minute, the magic world isnt exactly normal...
"Probably a girl named Annie. She was the daughter of a powerful warlock, and an almost as powerful witch! she uses fire magic" Colli's face lit up when i said fire " She has LIMITLESS talent and potential, probably more than even you! she used magic to subdue an alpha shadow bear when she was 3, and she trapped its spirit in her teddy bear which she named tibbers. when she needs him, she can summon tibbers to fight with her. she is only about 6, yet she is more powerful than most of the people i have seen! her only weakness is her range... she has very short range, but she can use that against most people who fight close range." Colli was amazed at all of the stories i had to tell her.
"Wowww ahri, you have so many stories to tell! i want to learn to be powerful like one of thoose people you mentioned! wow!" Colli was practically bouncing with exitement.
"Okay, i think i have a spell i can teach you. it may suit you very well, and it is one of my favorites! it is called Fox-Fire. it summons three flames that circle around you and hit the nearest enemies." Colli was suprised, she was actually going to be learning a spell, she thought it was going to be all channeling magic energy and stuff.
"Here, let me demonstrate" I twirled and three blue flames appeared and started orbiting around me. Colli stared at them in disbelief
"Colli, raise your aura and come closer" So she did and when she got close enough, the fires chased after her, she looked scared and put her hands in front of her face. but the fire didnt hit her, she raised a shield unintentionally, and it protected her.
"Wha-whaaat?" Colli looked confused "Arent i supposed to be burning right now?" she looked confused
"that is just a sign, you have learned a new spell colli! you can put a spell shield up around you or your allies."
I Smiled at colli, and at the progress she was making.

[BrookeTheSheep]

MY TURN. I'll start writing. It will be a FUN chapter.