Mod app (I think edited!)

[kittens1234]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:

BrookeTheSheep wrote:

Aheadjeffrey wrote:OK. I was hoping for mod. I don't really care if I'm childish; I just really like to have fun with kids! (I'm around kids a lot.) So, I am giving this a chance.
I am really nice and always follow rules. I am VIP-Gold and I am enjoying it.
With mod, I will make stuff in flat world like I want to. (yes of course.) I'd like Mod mostly because I love this server very much.
I have invited 4 people: Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made a lot of friends like Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron I think, and many more.
I'll use the commands for good, to protect the server, and to tell people to make sure to follow rules.
I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines.
So, I hope I get it! Be welcome to post comments! " title="Very Happy">

I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentences made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.

She just gave you the freaking fixed version...

[Aheadjeffrey]

So do i just copy it and delete my old on

[Aheadjeffrey]

Well i also added some new stuff to it...