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2013-07-21, 06:31 PM
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2013-07-21, 06:33 PM
You need to include more. Here, use my free guidelines for being a Trusted player
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2013-07-21, 07:42 PM
A ton of grammar mistakes, and very short.
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2013-07-22, 02:38 AM
Capitalize your "I" and make your app a bit longer.
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2013-07-22, 10:21 AM
Your app is great, but to seal in your chances, move away from the bullet points, try to expand on you reasons, say how you found the server etc.
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