Could I Be Trusted?

andresrox Offline

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#1

2013-07-12, 03:04 PM

I was just wondering if I could be trusted? I know I have been jailed a few times, but I have changed. I have been on this server for a while now and I was just thinking that it is time for me to get trusted. THE END

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tobiii1004 Offline

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#2

2013-07-12, 03:08 PM

I said this on the server, but if I can read your app in under 4 seconds, that's a sign for you to make your app longer.

Add a few things...
-How did you find McTopia?
-What will you do with trusted?
-How long have you played on McTopia?
-Why do you want it?

That should at LEAST give you 15 more sentences.

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benmegamine Offline

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#3

2013-07-12, 03:10 PM

UM I think you need to say what you would do for the server all that kind of stuff and It was I bit to short but I hope all goes well GOOD LUCK! <img src=

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benmegamine Offline

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#4

2013-07-12, 03:15 PM

Yeah and like Toby has said how you found the server what you would do for the server and how would you help out and all of that infomation any way good luck and maybe you should take the advice evreyone is giving you and put it into another application. ANYHOOOOOOWW BYE

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andresrox Offline

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#5

2013-07-12, 03:19 PM

According to Tobiii I cannot delete applications, so from now on this application is closed. I may re-apply at a later date.

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money099 Offline

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#6

2013-07-12, 03:36 PM

To Andresrox,

You are a pretty good person, BUT, try not to kill random people who seem weaker than you *cough
You can also click the 'edit' button in the top right hand corner of your application.

To the readers
Otherwise from that, I agree with tobii. He is pretty qualified: he shows good character (he didnt rage when liam killed him).
I expect to find lots of potential in him.

(I think i sound like a robot <img src=

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Varstar7 Offline

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#7

2013-07-13, 12:24 AM

Like what money said don't kill people randomly. Also make your app longer what tofu said. Also don't troll people that is how you got banned last time. <img src=

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tobiii1004 Offline

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#8

2013-07-13, 02:05 PM

Dang, everyone agreed with me xD

Yo. Andres. Don't delete it or throw a fit or nothin. EDIT THE APP. GAWSH. If you see, on the upper right hand corner of the topic, there is an Edit button. You can change the app.

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