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#1
1.why i think i sould get trusted]
ive been playing on mctopia for a good while and i think i sould just get and help evryone on mctopia.
2.il will help]
il help with enything even if its mineing! building\enything.
3.i wont grief]
when i was new on mctopia i would just grief..grief GRIEF!!! but not enymorel.

4.i found mctpia because my friend (corallightbulb)+charliesefirt)and they said hey try mctopia.us its so cool!!!! and thats how i got to mctopia <img src=" title="Very Happy">

5. i will do pvp if asked and give backs if asks.I will give the persons stuff back if give backs i wil be fare to.

hockeyguy's trusted app
#2
Fix the grammar and spelling, maybe add good examples. Add where you found the server and what you'll do with thcommands.
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

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Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#3
Well I have a couple of things,

1. Make each point longer or make more points
2. Play on McTopia more
3. Tell us possibly friends who could vouh for you
4. Just a few days ago you told us your server was better than mctopia so you have to make up for that somehow
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#4
Approved.


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