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1258933 mod app - 1258933 - 2013-11-05
I would love to be mod because I want to review the server and I want to be the good and look for the good now I was grounded for a couple of weeks and that is why I have not been on latly. I want to become the best helper in mctopa and I want to be able to fly over all the buildings and so. Plz I want to review this AMAZING SERVER THX
1258933 mod app - deahtworlds - 2013-11-05
I'm sorry but please look at other mod/admin applications and edit accordingly for us to even consider your application. Your missing several key elements.
Proper Grammar.
List of friends/vouches.
Length.
Professionalism.
Proof you know the commands.
Lastly be more active.
Or PLLPPL.
1258933 mod app - CCoesBruins - 2013-11-05
It is way too short.
You will not be getting staff. Sorry.
1258933 mod app - CCoesBruins - 2013-11-05
Unless you clean it up A LOT
Right now, you will not be getting staff, but I will help you have a better chance of getting it.
1. Make it way longer.
2. Explain more WHY you want staff.
3. Tell us what you will do to help the server out.
4. Fix your grammar.
5. Add some catchy phrases and humor.
6. Make the reader have learned a lesson of why you should get staff.
7. Get more active on the forums.
8. Come on The server more often, so people can get a sense of why you are helpful, and so we can get to know you better.
http://forums.mctopia.us/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=3431&sid=7d70f8462753aa2f59f1cb3807b2a970
Look at some tips from Emmy's guide for writing Staff apps.
Good luck.
1258933 mod app - challenger410 - 2013-11-05
1258933 wrote:I would love to be mod because I want to review the server and I want to be the good and look for the good now I was grounded for a couple of weeks and that is why I have not been on latly. I want to become the best helper in mctopa and I want to be able to fly over all the buildings and so. Plz I want to review this AMAZING SERVER THX
lol
McTopa
1258933 mod app - tobiii1004 - 2013-11-05
Hey, so here are a few pointers...
-Sincerest apologies, but I don't really KNOW you...being well known on the server is essential. We can't have an obscure Mod, now, can we? Do things. Help out. Make friends. Be WELL KNOWN in the McTopia community, and try again.
-Grammar makes it sound better and makes you sound more motivated.
-Make it longer. Develop on yourself, how long you've been on, people who think you'd be a good Mod, why you want it, etc. Being able to fly over buildings isn't exactly a reason, sincerest apologies.
Try again in a few months, I apologize.
1258933 mod app - mattjtv - 2013-11-05
Are you a KOALA?
Because it seems like you don't meet the certain.. koalafications
YEEEEAAAAHHHHHHH
1258933 mod app - challenger410 - 2013-11-05
mattjtv wrote:Are you a KOALA?
Because it seems like you don't meet the certain.. koalafications
YEEEEAAAAHHHHHHH
You Hippocrite
1258933 mod app - mattjtv - 2013-11-05
challenger410 wrote:mattjtv wrote:Are you a KOALA?
Because it seems like you don't meet the certain.. koalafications
YEEEEAAAAHHHHHHH
You Hippocrite
You are giraffing me crazy with these arguments! It is unbearable.
1258933 mod app - challenger410 - 2013-11-05
mattjtv wrote:challenger410 wrote:mattjtv wrote:Are you a KOALA?
Because it seems like you don't meet the certain.. koalafications
YEEEEAAAAHHHHHHH
You Hippocrite
You are giraffing me crazy with these arguments! It is unbearable.
Stop lion to me. Bee truthful.