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Our old story - SilverWolf101 - 2013-07-24

Remember our old story on the topic REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY?
We. Were. AMAZING.
I reread the whole thing, and I have two things to say.

1. man I suck at writing
2. Poor Mason.

I was also thinking, if a good writer from the group was willing to. They could rewrite our chapters, keeping important stuff, fixing spelling mistakes and stuff. Then post them in one big post so it's easier to read. I would also LOVE to make like a cover for it, cause I always thought of it as a book but I CAN'T DRAW. I'm OKAY at drawing people with pencils, but I'm really only good at Chibis. D:

Also if you wanna check the story out, here is the link. :3

http://mctopia.us/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=2319&sid=a7a810ccfc9b495d2a446aff0d8698b2

The writers:
Gemu (Ahri)
Tobiii (Talon/Alice)
Silver (Avi)
Meta (James)
Boo (Fay/Purity
Neko (Repaire. She wasn't in the story much but she was mentioned more than Mason. :3)
Golden (Colli)
Hailstorm (Diligence. Still mentioned more than Mason...) jk. She was supposed to be in the story the. The topic DIED.
Ummmm.... I think that's it?
OH YEAH!
Chall (Mason)

Our old story - challenger410 - 2013-07-24

SilverWolf101 wrote:I reread the whole thing, and I have two things to say.

1. man I suck at writing
2. Poor Mason.


Neko (Repaire. She wasn't in the story much but she was mentioned more than Mason. :3)
Hailstorm (Diligence. Still mentioned more than Mason...) jk. She was supposed to be in the story the. The topic DIED.
OH YEAH!
Chall (Mason)

xD that messed up, but it's true! LOL

Our old story - matttana3 - 2013-07-24

instead of editing and adding on to the old one why dont we just start a new one?

Adventures of Waddles the Pig Man!
thts sounds awesome we should do that silver you can be the illustrator and a writer. And who ever else you want can be writers too.

Our old story - matttana3 - 2013-07-24

and you are a good at drawing.

Our old story - SilverWolf101 - 2013-07-24

matttana3 wrote:instead of editing and adding on to the old one why dont we just start a new one?

Adventures of Waddles the Pig Man!
thts sounds awesome we should do that silver you can be the illustrator and a writer. And who ever else you want can be writers too.

Uhm. I can't just illustrate and write an entire story, because you want me to. I can't even write my own story. Thanks about me being a good drawer. I'm really not. o-o
We tried making a second story. A third too. I would LOVE to do another story. The first one was FANTASTIC.
I guess right now we aren't into it. And we need Gemu on more for it. :3 she is the one that starts it off.
We just need Gemu on more, I wish Brooke could write with us, and Mason to get his butt over here and write more often! >:O
If the others (Gemu, Chall, meta, tobiii, golden. (she's never on anymore DSmile maybe even Neko) agree to making a. New one. I'm fine with it. I would miss Avi, a lot. But I like making new characters.

I guess we'll see if this topic leads to a new story.

Also your story idea sounds like a funny/cute/silly story. :3

Our old story - tobiii1004 - 2013-07-24

I can try, when I have time! I tried doing this and it literally took forever

Our old story - matttana3 - 2013-07-26

SilverWolf101 wrote:
matttana3 wrote:instead of editing and adding on to the old one why dont we just start a new one?

Adventures of Waddles the Pig Man!
thts sounds awesome we should do that silver you can be the illustrator and a writer. And who ever else you want can be writers too.

Uhm. I can't just illustrate and write an entire story, because you want me to. I can't even write my own story. Thanks about me being a good drawer. I'm really not. o-o
We tried making a second story. A third too. I would LOVE to do another story. The first one was FANTASTIC.
I guess right now we aren't into it. And we need Gemu on more for it. :3 she is the one that starts it off.
We just need Gemu on more, I wish Brooke could write with us, and Mason to get his butt over here and write more often! >:O
If the others (Gemu, Chall, meta, tobiii, golden. (she's never on anymore DSmile maybe even Neko) agree to making a. New one. I'm fine with it. I would miss Avi, a lot. But I like making new characters.

I guess we'll see if this topic leads to a new story.

Also your story idea sounds like a funny/cute/silly story. :3


not you do the whole thing like everyone writes and you can draw a picture every once in a while. Also you can write some with everyone else.

Our old story - tobiii1004 - 2013-07-26

I think you should still draw all the characters <img src=" title="Very Happy"> i'll draw em too if ya want, because you're busy drawing the wolves

Our old story - SilverWolf101 - 2013-07-27

tobiii1004 wrote:I think you should still draw all the characters <img src=" title="Very Happy"> i'll draw em too if ya want, because you're busy drawing the wolves

Actually, tobiii I do want to draw at least SOME, so you can start doing 1 or 2 while I try to draw things better

Our old story - tobiii1004 - 2013-07-27

SilverWolf101 wrote:
tobiii1004 wrote:I think you should still draw all the characters <img src=" title="Very Happy"> i'll draw em too if ya want, because you're busy drawing the wolves

Actually, tobiii I do want to draw at least SOME, so you can start doing 1 or 2 while I try to draw things better

oookkkeeey!