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Teaser - (Don't know story name) - xXSlurpieXx - 2012-11-29
In the crazed blue moonlight on Halloween night, Faith Goodrich and Alice Markely were having fun scaring little children, Emily and Jesse making out in the closet, and Emma standing akwardly in the middle of this, making to comment. Faith was a strange girl, brown hair and had the most amazing eyes you could ever think of. On the other side... Alice was a total girly girl, hated everything Faith did but yet they managed to be best friends. And Emma, Emma was unique, she was the one who was the prettiest girl in school, yet she was shy and unrecongnized. Jesse and Emily had just finished high school, them obviously in a relationship. They were hired by Faith's parents to babysit her, but took on the job of the other two teens. They thought the three kids would be easily manageable... but they weren't prepared for what happens next.
HAI this is a teaser from a story I've been writing in english and I wanted to incorporate some of my friends from mctopia!
I'm not sure what the title will be but I will check comments and tell me if you have any good titles. I can pretty much incorporate any titles you may think of into my writing, but I want this to be a really spectacular piece, and every great work of literature has a great title.
Thanks!
EDIT : Haha emily's post... We didn't make out IN FRONT of them we were in the closet... DUH
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - challenger410 - 2012-11-29
Pretty good
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-29
I would gives your thumBs up if you could see my hand
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - xXSlurpieXx - 2012-11-29
Lol chall it was just describing the main characters...
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - challenger410 - 2012-11-29
I can't help with a title, until I hear more. Lol
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-29
I didn't realize you were capable of writing a romance. XD
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-29
also I am NOT a girly girl!!! XD
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - challenger410 - 2012-11-29
Your real name is Alice?
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-29
challenger410 wrote:Your real name is Alice?
It's not. I love her name for muuuch
Teaser - (Don't know story name) - Pieguy201 - 2012-11-29
xXSlurpieXx wrote:In the crazed blue moonlight on Halloween night, Faith Goodrich and Alice Markely were having fun scaring little children, Emily and Jesse making out in the closet, and Emma standing akwardly in the middle of this, making to comment. Faith was a strange girl, brown hair and had the most amazing eyes you could ever think of. On the other side... Alice was a total girly girl, hated everything Faith did but yet they managed to be best friends. And Emma, Emma was unique, she was the one who was the prettiest girl in school, yet she was shy and unrecongnized. Jesse and Emily had just finished high school, them obviously in a relationship. They were hired by Faith's parents to babysit her, but took on the job of the other two teens. They thought the three kids would be easily manageable... but they weren't prepared for what happens next.
HAI this is a teaser from a story I've been writing in english and I wanted to incorporate some of my friends from mctopia!
I'm not sure what the title will be but I will check comments and tell me if you have any good titles. I can pretty much incorporate any titles you may think of into my writing, but I want this to be a really spectacular piece, and every great work of literature has a great title.
Thanks!
my uncles name is jesse =p