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My Story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-10-27

Okay this is my story! Keep in mind, THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT!

My name is Laikaios.I have to survive on my own and around here it is survival of the fittest. Storm clouds are rolling in I haven’t found a shelter. I quickly transform into a wolf and dig out a small den under a thorn bush. Some thorns get into my silvery fur and it stings like bees.
“I haven’t seen another wolf in ages and the last wolf I encountered wasn’t very friendly” I say as I look at my scar. I quickly become drowsy and I begin to fall asleep. “Tomorrow everything will be better.” I say as I fall asleep. I awaken and smell one thing. Prey. As I walk out of my den I see the dew on the grass sparkle like crystals. “Today is going to be a good day.” I say to myself. I close my eyes and use my senses. The prey is past the two birch trees ahead. I quickly go into a “hunters crouch” and begin to stalk it. I make sure the wind doesn’t blow my scent over to it then I quickly jump between the birch trees and pounce. Satisfied with my catch I transform back to human. My tail drags against the grass turning my tail damp. With everything wet I cant make a fire. I’m known as a troublemaker and thief. I have to steal to survive even though it’s very risky. I turn back into a wolf because wolves have a lot of stamina. I bury my prey by the den to eat it later. I see an area with no trees. “It must be humans.” I say to myself. Actually it’s a path. I follow it because who knows what is that the other end. It could be something that can help me survive. I go a steady trot down the path when I see a dark brown figure. Another wolf! I speed up. It’s a dark brown she wolf who looks very friendly.
“Hi!” she says. “I’m FurryTail.”

My Story! - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-10-27

I know exactly who FurryTail is. Good story btw! <img src=" title="Very Happy">

My Story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-10-27

GoldenLynx54 wrote:I know exactly who FurryTail is. Good story btw! <img src=" title="Very Happy">

Shaddup. You dont know anything.

My Story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-10-27

golden PMed me about how i said "My tail dragged along the grass" after i turned into a human. Well in human form she has a tail too! >.<

My Story! - Metazard - 2012-10-27

Lol xD

My Story! - challenger410 - 2012-10-27

XD that makes more sense

My Story! - tobiii1004 - 2012-10-27

*clapclapclap*

My Story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-10-28

Rough draft part 2 (PART TWO PART TWO PART TWO!)

I'm not sure I can trust this wolf. "Hey. My name is Laikaios. But you can call me Likos."
Suddenly FurryTail's ears go back. "Bear!" she shrieks. I turn to see shrubs and undergrowth moving and it reveals the large brown figure. I grab her and push her ahead. I sprint as fast as I can. This colossal creature looks large and clumsy but actually are quite fast. I keep running and I glance back. It seemed to be after me so I yell under the growls and roars of the bear.
"Split up! It seems to be after me!" I dart over to the nearest tree.
"What are you doing?!" FurryTail screams.
"Trust me I know what I'm doing!" The bear swipes at my hind leg right as I sink my claws into the tree. I transform into a human and scramble up the tree. Its searing pain but I jump to the next tree. I jump a couple of trees even though it makes my leg feel worse. Now the bear can't get me and I have to hope FurryTail is alright.


It's short, but I need to get used to writing again.I don't write stories all the time.

My Story! - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-10-28

Why don't you use my prompts. =3 You know you want to. But imagine every little detail in your head and write what you see. I don't care much about the other senses in writing XD

My Story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-10-28

GoldenLynx54 wrote:Why don't you use my prompts. =3 You know you want to. But imagine every little detail in your head and write what you see. I don't care much about the other senses in writing XD

I don't want to use ur prompts. I have planned this story for ages... AND U DIDN'T KNOW! MWAHAHHAHAHA!