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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - mattjtv - 2012-11-29

challenger410 wrote:there a little thing on the top right corner of the general discussion, it says "mark all read" use that instead. and i didnt say you cant read it, i just asked of you not to post on it if you arent going to write in it.

I'll right next, after someone else does

I do that all the time, but I don't do it when one post i unmarked. Oh, and I was replying to Mcman <img src=" title="Smile">


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-30

BrookeTheSheep wrote:
challenger410 wrote:
BrookeTheSheep wrote:Ima write something
SOME FLUFF

Still feels weird reading about you and James o.O lol

It isn't me and James, it is Fay and James.
It feels odd writing about it >~<

Is ok I'll just kill James


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-30

No!
It would mess up the plot line of everything >.<


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-30

Hehehe I'm joking. Don't worry I'll figure something out that'll get you two together I SWEAR IT


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-30

Metazard wrote:Hehehe I'm joking. Don't worry I'll figure something out that'll get you two together I SWEAR IT

MR.KRABS!!!! I HAVE AN IDEA!!!!!(angelic spongebob)


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-30

I'll pm you two, and I'll see how you like the idea xD


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-30

My turn


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-30

"Happy birthday to you!" They finished singing the song ad a blew out the candles. Ahri slices the ale and gives us each. I get the largest slice and I stuff it into my beak.
"Can I hab a gowld apple because it's my birday?" I asked with my beak still full.
"Sure" Ahri gives me a gold apple. I felt stronger, happier, and less tired.
"Bring me presents!" I told everyone. First Colli's present. It was a book all about bird people and other half animals.
"Thank you!" I say. I create a birthday pile by tossing each of my presents in the same spot. Next Fay's gift. It was a necklace that had a tiny blue orb in the middle with 2 feathers on each side.
"Thank you Fay!" after opening each present I examine my pile. A necklace, a book, some toys, and more. I put on the necklace and dig through my pile. Sparky jumps on me with a pine cone in his mouth.
"Thanks Sparky!" I giggle. I take his gift and he eats the food from the floor.
"James take my presents to my room! And I don't want any of them to be ruined!" That would be hard because my room was up the stairs.
I play with my necklace and turn to Fay.
"It's pretty"
"It looks great on you. It's a good luck charm" she tells me
" yay!" I'm lucky!
"To the couch! Everyone! Including you James. Just drop my stuff there" James drops my things at the top of the stairs and we all cuddle on the couch. What a wonderful night. The fire blazed, the stars shined, but something was lurking in the night. planning to strike in three days.... Peregrine.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-30

Someone wriiiite! this story is sooooo aweshum.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-30

One day, I'll be accepted back into the family