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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
challenger410 wrote:i thought james was in a coma?
He was, but everyone thinks he is dead
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-26
I wake up from the haze. I see Purity, except she seems different.
I start to say, "Purity, why are you so..."
"Small?", she replies, "I'm like this because, I am no longer Purity. Please call me Fay. you have been out cold for a couple of months"
"Errm, ok." I respond, quite confused
"Pur.. Fay, I saw our family. They were in a fight, I just KNOW it happened. im not sure if all of it is true, but im sure James, and our family in trouble.
"I know, I was there for the most part, but i had to leave. My fellow fairies have taken me to this safe haven. They said I can stay here forever, if i wish. Mason.... your brother."
"What about him?"
"He's dead!" she begins to cry, and I run to her. we sit there for hours. we both loved him, her, becuase they were meant to live together, forever. It hurt me, becuase he was my brother. The only thing left in my family. I KNEW he wasn't dead, he couldnt be dead, but he was in mortal danger. I try to comfort her the best I can, letting her cry in my soft, shiny, orange, black, and white fur. Then I tell Fay, trying not to get her hopes up.
"James isn't dead, he IS in danger, but not dead."
How do you know, YOUR NEVER WITH HIM!" she countered, and it stung, but I stay calm, preventing my animal instincts from lashing back at her.
"I know this because, he is my brother. We come from a special line of blood, which is destined to always have twins. my fathers, forefathers, and there forefathers, and so on." I told her, " the twins lives share the same thread. If one of us dies, so does the other. What im guessing is he got hit by something, and it nearly killed him. putting him in a coma. That's why I have been out too. If he was dead, i would share hi same fate."
she sighed with relief. "thank god"
"He's not out of the woods yet, he is still in danger. He still needs to be found.... I miss my family"
Fay looked at me strangely, and I realized I did it again. I said My family. She knew something strange was going on, and asked me to stay behind. She asked true, and trust to see if they could do anything about why I was asking different. I also told Fay that I was getting strange visions, of e as a boy, that I didn't remember. That's when she knew I've been brainwashed. True and Trust began work immediately, and Fay went off to the family house alone. She knew how to fly, so I guess she'll be fine.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
ok. Don't write with that for a while.
'cause i want to write about those months that we skipped.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-26
BrookeTheSheep wrote:ok. Don't write with that for a while.
'cause i want to write about those months that we skipped.
ok
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
GemuFoxxx wrote:it HAS BEEN EDITED.
Gemu XD
It's still conflicting because I told Avi to get away from me when I turned Into a dragon XD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-26
pretend this happened
Avi: Alice! we need to help them! turn into a dragon!
Alice: No! it could be dangerous for you...
Avi: it will be dangerous for the family if you DONT. we need to protect the family
Alice: o.o okay.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
GemuFoxxx wrote:pretend this happened
Avi: Alice! we need to help them! turn into a dragon!
Alice: No! it could be dangerous for you...
Avi: it will be dangerous for the family if you DONT. we need to protect the family
Alice: o.o okay.
Well no...because it explains in my chapter that I turned into a dragon because of sheer rage XD
Like Jacob from twilight C:
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-26
jacob could also phase whenever he wanted. :3
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-26
this is how i imagine it tobii
i drew that xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
GemuFoxxx wrote:jacob could also phase whenever he wanted. :3
So can I. :3