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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-26
And it's True not Trust.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
GoldenLynx54 wrote:And it's True not Trust.
No, True and Trust are different people. I mentioned that True, Trust, and Happiness carried me away
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-26
We have 64 pages. A stack of pages
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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
" title="Very Happy">yaaay
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-26
I was worried about Chives and James. Sure, I didn't really like them but they were family. Flicking my bushy tail, I climbed up the stairs. I couldn't stand to see James in such a state. I slam into my door and get a purple bruise on my forehead. "Owwww." Quickly pushing through the squeaky door, I sit on my bed. My head throbbed with pain, and I quickly spied a paper. reaching towards it, I realize what it is. It was a drawing I had had for a while, one I had made when I was cast out.
It was a picture of me and Aurora. Suddenly I was filled to the brim with grief. I haven't seen Mum in a while. I've heard slight whispers in my dreams, a blur of orange fur in the woods, but she hasn't visited for a while. I missed her very much.
My entire being was filled with grief; from not seeing Aurora, James being almost dead, and Fay being gone. In fact, I think my heart left with Fay. I personally don't like the name Fay, but I call her that out of respect. I would cry, but my tears ran out. There was so much loss. Even seeing all the leaves fall in a rainbow of reds and oranges didn't comfort me.
I felt like my life had crumbled. There wasn't a shred of happiness, only loss. taking my diary out, I peered inside. I read entry after entry, until I came to the last- and the shortest.
"Aurora isn't here."
I stuffed the dusty book into the chest, and turned back to my bed. I wasn't aware of anyone around me so I was going to go to sleep. I hope. My bruise wasn't throbbing now and I was slipping up the ladder to my top bunk when my hand brushed something. My paper on the Paw Stars. I took it out and uncrumpled it. I smiled; it was exactly how I left it.
Climbing up to the bunk bed, I peer out the window. A full moon stood protectively in the sky, watching the stars. Glimpsing a constellation of bright stars, I instantly notice something new. It wasn't one constellation. It was many.
There was a whole trail of paw prints, leading away from the house and into the woods. the trees glowed with an unearthly white, giving the woods a ghostly feel. somehow it reminded me of Purity. Not Fay, Purity.
I was now under a weird trance. Maybe Purity WAS there! Then I could find her, and be a hero! Quickly I packed things. Compass, cookies, a spell book, and my secret charm.
I set out through the window with a rope, and when I landed onto the leaves I breathed in the cold air. I would find her. I was finding Purity!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-26
I AM GOING TO WRITE THE BATTLE.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
QUICK NOTES-
1. Everyone thinks i'm dead.
2. YOU CAN'T FIND ME, IT WOULD MESS UP MY PLOT
3. Purity is gone. Doesn't exist. Only Fay.
I KNOW! Maybe this is a trap made by Fear!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-26
No one seems to care that a six year old bird thing has a large gash in her siiiiide.
lol
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
GemuFoxxx wrote:I AM GOING TO WRITE THE BATTLE.
Hehehe make sure it ties in with what i wrote <3
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
I skipped ahead to after the battle.
Basically SOMETHING scared everyone away.