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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
So, basically, I was carried away by fairies.
I'll write about the following months, with me living there. I never forgot about you guys, But i tried too.
Also, you guys do not try to find me, because Fear says that I'm dead.
Theeenn, I hear James' voice in my mind, and come to his aid.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
BrookeTheSheep wrote:So, basically, I was carried away by fairies.
I'll write about the following months, with me living there. I never forgot about you guys, But i tried too.
Also, you guys do not try to find me, because Fear says that I'm dead.
Theeenn, I hear James' voice in my mind, and come to his aid.
" title="Very Happy"> Creative new plot
" title="Very Happy"> i love it!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-26
Thanks!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-26
everything was a blur. I sneak up in to the roof and look at my wings. I jump off and begin to glide through the air. It felt great. I search for weaker opponents. I fly behind someone and push them over, I then jump on top of them and peck their head. I rake my small talons down his back and I fly up out of reach. I do the same attacks when I think of a new one. when no one is looking I fly to the ground and act dead. I open my eyes the slightest bit. Someone came near so I move my leg causing them to fall on another person. I peck both of them and rake my talons down their backs. I decide to stay low for a bit. I trip a lot of people when I come by Alice. She was furious, she told me to get away and she turned into a dragon. While I was watching someone snuck up behind me and knocked me over. he creates a large gash in my side.
"I dnt think three year olds should go into battle." He snickers.
Alice, yells stop in her double edge voice. She attacks Fear and causes all of the army to leave.
Is everyone all right? I wonder
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-26
After they left, I shrank into girl form.
Everyone sort of stared at me, shocked.
"Alice..." Someone called. I didn't answer, I was still burning anger from Fear's disrespect towards Fay.
Speaking of Fay, where was she?!
"Give me a second to calm down..." I pointed my finger at them...then my legs swayed and I blacked out. Jack rushed to help me.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I woke next to the fire. My usual spot. Soon it would be too warm to sit by the fire. Jack was sitting next to my sleeping form, petting my ears.
He laughed. "My vicious little Platinara." He kissed my head. "That was quite a transformation. You alright?" He knew I was alright, though. He was a dragon himself, he knew that I would be fine.
I smiled sleepily. "Of course I'm fine."
I frowned. "But where's Fay?"
He smiled. "You really treat her like a sister." I nodded. "Any girl in this family is my sister. Any boy is my brother. I'll defend them all."
He sighed and rolled his eyes. "You Platinaras are so defensive sometimes..." he winked, a sure sign he was just joking around.
I closed my eyes again, at peace. Then I remembered Fay. Again.
"I do wonder where she is, though...I hope nothing happened to her. I haven't seen her since I turned into a dragon..."
"Yeah. She hates me, but I think she's nice. She probably thinks I hate her." He chuckled.
"She sure loves James a lot." I smiled at the memories of them together.
"Yeah. It reminds me of you and me." He said this corny comment because he knows that romantic and cheesy things annoy me. I slapped his leg. Or at least tried to. The slap came out pitiful and weak because I was tired.
"No cheesy comments."
He held up his hands in mock surrender. "Alright."
"Her and James are so cute."
Wait.
James!
"Is everyone alright? Specifically James, he seemed to be in pretty bad condition." Worry lines creased my forehead.
"Shh...calm down. You need to rest. Everyone is fine. Avi is so happy her wings grew in." He smiled in a very big-brotherly like way. Around my family, he was losing his cool outer shell. He was being nice and warm. I liked it that way.
His smile faded, though. "James...well..." He removed his hands from my bunny ears and put them in his lap. He twiddled his thumbs.
"Yes?" I was worried. James was a good guy. He was good to everyone, specifically Fay. We got off to a rough start but we were friends now. At least I think.
"He's..."
"What, Jack?" I was getting more concerned by the second.
"James is dead."
And a moment of shock slapped me.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-26
kittens1234 wrote:SOMEONE HAS TO REACT TO THE FACT THAT I SMELLED A HUMAN AFTER TOBIII'S CHAPTER >.<
NO ONE HAS DONE THIS YET.
IT WILL SCREW STUFF UP
BOO IS THE HUMAN
SOMEONE REACT, FOR LIKE A CHAPTER IN THE MIDDLE
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-26
I hear a flashback coming on! Someone write stuff before the battle, when boo announces des called Fay and stuff
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-26
Metazard wrote:I hear a flashback coming on! Someone write stuff before the battle, when boo announces des called Fay and stuff
ZACTLY.
BUT IT CAN'T BE ME.
IM KNOCKED OUT ON THE SIDE OF THE HOUSE IN A POOL OF ASH AND BLOOD.
WITH CAL, A HUMAN.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-26
Who. Is. CAL?
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-26
Metazard wrote:I hear a flashback coming on! Someone write stuff before the battle, when boo announces des called Fay and stuff
*puts hand to ear* What do flashbacks sound like?