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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25
challenger410 wrote:BrookeTheSheep wrote:Yeah, because he character makes sense!
You wrote around 2 times, i didn't understand it
i told you i suck at writing :\
You don't suck at writing, you just tried to create another plot line.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-25
well... thats what i do >
lol, i guess ill just intersect my plotline with somone elses, so they merge, and mine dies out, so im in the story again...
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-25
challenger410 wrote:well... thats what i do >
Sounds good
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-25
VVVVVVV
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25
I wanna write.
May I write some irrelevant fun chapter? That doesn't really affect the story?
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-25
Yussssss do I have to put in in the paragraph? Or....just write it
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-25
I just can't include the boys XD I just...can't. I actually was planning to put in Mason and Meta (James?) but I made it like Purity and Emma lol. sorry.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25
kittens1234 wrote:Yussssss do I have to put in in the paragraph? Or....just write it
What do you mean?
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-25
BrookeTheSheep wrote:kittens1234 wrote:Yussssss do I have to put in in the paragraph? Or....just write it
What do you mean?
I was thinking bout somthin else wand waś to lazy to delete it!!! Write write writttte
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25
"Purity?" a voice said
"Wha- Who said that?" I asked.
It was mid afternoon, and I was out gathering apples. I wanted to make a special "welcome back" meal for Alice, but we didn't have apples.
"Me, Purity! You best friend! Don't you remember?" the voice said.
"I'm sorry, where are you? Who are you?" I asked.
"It is me, True." the voice said.
"TRUE!" I shouted.
True was my friend when I was a little girl. She was part of the fairy clan.
"I heard that you found your True One!' True said.
"Umm... Where are you?" I said.
Turning around, I saw a tiny pink fairy fluttering in the air.
Giggling, True said, "Right here, silly! Now, tell me about everything. And i mean everything"
I did. I told her about the kingdom falling, Ahri finding me, the family, James, Alice, and me losing my purity.
"Now, where have YOU been?" I inquired.
"Well... When the kingdom fell, I only survived because I could fly. All the fay survived. We live in peace in a big tree. Word got around that there was a house in the clearing by the edge of the forest. I decided to check it out. I found you, and was very happy! I also found the camp of people trying to take you back. I didn't want to startle you. Also, I thought that some of your new family might be afraid of me. And think I was a spy. I was waiting until you entered the forest. And now here we are!" True said.
"May I introduce you to my family? I'm sure they won't be afraid, if I introduce you." I suggested.
"No no no. I must go. I don't have a lot of time here," said True, "I can give you something. A gift from the fay."
True pulled an orb out of her small backpack.
"Here. It is the Blessing Of The Fairies. It gives you the power to transform into a fairy. Wings and all! You can use it whenever you want. It is easy too! Just think hard about turning into a fairy, and BOOM! You are one!" True said, excitedly.
She handed it to me. As soon as I touched it, it burst into pink light. The pink light went into my head, and I had the feeling of being a bit more powerful.
"Try it out!" True stated.
"Be a fairy, be a fairy, be a fairy" I thought.
Suddenly, the world grew large. I felt a bit dizzy. I looked at my back, and sure enough, I had wings! I looked at True and smiled. I flew around for a bit.
"Do you like it?" True asked.
"I love it! Thank you True!" I exclaimed.
"Also, did you pick a new name yet?" said True.
"No, I haven't." I replied.
"What about Fay?"
"Hm... I like it. I'll talk it over with James."
"Oh no!" squealed True, "It is almost 4! I must go!"
Grasping my hand, True said, "I hope to see you again, Fay."
"Stop by the house any time."
"Ok, I will!" True said, happy again, "Goodbye now!"
"Bye, True!!"
I fluttered back home, carefree. I saw my best friend, I got a new power, AND a new name!
It couldn't be better.
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OOPS. Turns out this chapter is MAJORLY important.