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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-25

OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
WE ARE AWESOME <img src=" title="Very Happy">
MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
<img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked">

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-25

kittens1234 wrote:OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
WE ARE AWESOME <img src=" title="Very Happy">
MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
<img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked">

I found an error. Alice, or Talon, when she first came to the house, i was with her in Spirit Land. And she was like there. Watching me. In the real world/

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25

I fixed it for ya, tobiiiii

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-25

SilverWolf101 wrote:
kittens1234 wrote:OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
WE ARE AWESOME <img src=" title="Very Happy">
MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
<img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked">

I found an error. Alice, or Talon, when she first came to the house, i was with her in Spirit Land. And she was like there. Watching me. In the real world/

WHA....
NO, SEE REMEBER, PENIGRINE OR WHOEVER IS PRETENDING TO BE TALON, THAT CLEARS IT UP
SO ITS NOT REALLY TALON, ITS PENIGRINE

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-25

kittens1234 wrote:
SilverWolf101 wrote:
kittens1234 wrote:OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
WE ARE AWESOME <img src=" title="Very Happy">
MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
<img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked"> <img src=hock:" title="Shocked">

I found an error. Alice, or Talon, when she first came to the house, i was with her in Spirit Land. And she was like there. Watching me. In the real world/

WHA....
NO, SEE REMEBER, PENIGRINE OR WHOEVER IS PRETENDING TO BE TALON, THAT CLEARS IT UP
SO ITS NOT REALLY TALON, ITS PENIGRINE

lol. But didnt Tobii say something about Alice feeling guilty about possessng Avi and stuff? Or am i just being stupid

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-25

She never said that

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-25

kittens1234 wrote:She never said that

Yep. I'm stupid.

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-25

BrookeTheSheep wrote:I fixed it for ya, tobiiiii

Thank you so much. (:

*bows down to boo*

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-25

tobiii1004 wrote:
BrookeTheSheep wrote:I fixed it for ya, tobiiiii

Thank you so much. (:

*bows down to boo*

I just made it so he touched my shoulder to calm me down xD
James still freaks out.

REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-25

BrookeTheSheep wrote:
tobiii1004 wrote:
BrookeTheSheep wrote:I fixed it for ya, tobiiiii

Thank you so much. (:

*bows down to boo*

I just made it so he touched my shoulder to calm me down xD
James still freaks out.

Protective boyfriend. XD

Even though there was nothing romantic about it XD