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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-24
GemuFoxxx wrote:"The leaders are Courage, Fortitude, and Fear."
"Fear?" emma asked curiosly "Arent your kind named after good emotions?" she inquired
"They ran out" he shrugged
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I love this
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-24
I'm gonna write now!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-24
kittens1234 wrote:I'm gonna write now!
Yay! My writers block is overrrr
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-24
That Night, I had bad dreams. But, you have to understand, I'm slightly physic, my dreams come true. No one in my family knows.
So, that night I had bad dreams. I was standing in a felid of war. In frount of the house, my home. There were people fighting. Then, suddenly, I was on the roof. I was sitting in the cornor between the chimney and the wall. I could smell blood, and I was bleeding. My watch was shattered, and my hair was knotted. I felt...human. I was..cold. I hadn't felt cold in almost 300 years. I shivered. Then, suddenly, there was a man, with a stake and a staff. His staff was glowing, I assumed that was waht made me human. I didn't have fangs, or magic to protect myself as the stake came down, I felt it rushing past me then..I woke up shaking.
I wandered out side, and I swear I felt cold. I fell over, and stayed there for a while.
A little bit after my fit, I was still sitting outside on the ice, when I smelled somthing good, warm, and familer. Chives, with a cup of hot tea? Chocolate? IDONT KNOW WHAT ONE CHIVVES WOULD LIKE >.<. I assumed he came out here to look at the stars or something, but when he saw me, he dropped his hot drink and ran over.
"Emma, why are you sitting out here?"
"I had a bad dream"
He sighed, "Of all people, you know bad dreams can't hurt you."
I started crying. "b-b-but mine can!"
He akwardly patted me on the head, A motion I could almost be sure he had done to pure, many times.
"No, they can't"
"B-b-b-but..I'm physic" I blurted out
His face was unreadable, even for me.
"What was you dream about?"
After I told him, he was lost in thought for a while.
"They don't want to kill anybody else, why would they kill you?"
"Maybe, well, everybody thinks vampires are evil, right?" My voice was shaky but I continued, "and your people are good, maybe they want to get rid of evil; get rid of me."
I started shaking again.
"Come on, lets get you back inside"
Somehow, I mustered the strength to get back up, then I stumbled into the living room.
I sat down on the couch, and Chives sat down next to me. I moved into his lap, and I fell asleep.
When I awoke, the entire family was watching us. My face turned red.
Chives was still asleep, so I motioned to Ahri to follow me into the kitchen.
"I'm Physic"
Ahri gasped.
When I told her my dream, she frowned.
"But its totally okay for you to sleep with Chives after that" She giggled.
"Its not funny Ahri! I...I think it means I'm going to DIE!"
I'm sure the entire family heard that one.
The Family room went silent.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-24
Mai turn
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-24
You won't die!" I tell her!
Now that Alice is gone, I can't lose anyone else
Sparky slams into the wall, when trying to stop in here. we all start to giggle and I pick him up and leave the room.
"I need to make a toy for you!" I tell him.
I go outside and pick up and round smooth rock. It had a little sparkle to it. I came inside ad threw it across the room, seeing Sparky run after it. I grab a book and sit down.
Five more days until my birthday! If only Alice were here....
It's short. Sorry, It was longer, but then my mom erased the tab >:O
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-24
GOLDEN WRITE PLEASE
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-24
kittens1234 wrote:GOLDEN WRITE PLEASE
I SEE YOU ONLINE GOLDY, WRITE WRTIE
WRITE WRITE WRITEEEEEE
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-24
.... xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Neko6554 - 2012-11-24
kittens1234 wrote:kittens1234 wrote:GOLDEN WRITE PLEASE
I SEE YOU ONLINE GOLDY, WRITE WRTIEWRITE WRITE WRITEEEEEE
@_@ Stalking Golden!!! XD lol
GoldenLynx54 wrote:.... xD