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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-23
GemuFoxxx wrote:i heard a knock on the door. i walked over to go get it, but emma was already there. when she opened it, it was chives. that explains why she was there to open it... Chives looked worried.
"Is there something wrong?" emma said in her loving voice.
"I need to speak with ahri" he said to emma, and started walking twords me
"My tribe, they are planning to invade this place. they want to kill james so that pure will never lose her purity. i broke off from the tribe to warn you, but they wouldnt let me bring pure.
"WHAT?!?!?!?!?" I Screamed
"I acted SO stupidly then, i wish i could change what i have done." he said sincerely. I calmed myself down, this was not a time to be angry
"How many?" i asked
"around around 50 - 60, they are bringing the whole tribe." he replied
"emma? do you think we can handle it? we have Colli, Me, You, and James." i said to her.
"Do they have any special abilities?" emma asked chives.
"Not really, but they are GREAT fighters. and the leaders are the strongest of the bunch..."
"How many leaders?" i asked
"Three" he replied
"How long do we have?" i asked
"About a week" he said back. I sighed, i would have to teach colli a set of damaging magic within a week... perhaps we could get repaire to help also... i will NOT allow avi into the battle. and i really dont think mason is willing to come out of the woods.
"The leaders are Courage, Fortitude, and Fear."
"Fear?" emma asked curiosly "Arent your kind named after good emotions?" she inquired
"They ran out" he shrugged "I would take care when it comes to her, she can make you lose faith in everything in an instant."
emma laughed "She has never met me, ill show her REAL fear!" She grinned, showing her fangs
"Who, is this "Fortitude"? chives?" i asked. i had might as well know about the rest of the leaders, they will put up the biggest fight...
"She is a priest, she specializes in magic such as healing and shields." he said matter of factly
"Easy target for colli, she only has so long to learn a set of spells, so we sould give her fortitude."
"She is an easy target, but she is protected by Courage. Courage is the decision maker of the tribe. HE is the one who decided to take pure back. be careful with him, he is like a WALL. not easily taken down." chives informed me.
"Emma, would you help me with him please? i wont be able to take him down alone." i told her.
She looked dissapointed
"But i wanted to take down Fear!" She pouted.
"Ill let colli handle her until we take courage down, then you can show her REAL fear" i smiled.
"How come you cant take down courage alone?" Chives asked tentatively "You could take me down easily in one go." i flinched when he reminded me of how i almost killed him
"I am a mage assassin, i SPECIALIZE in taking people down in one go. however, if they dont go down in one go there is a high chance of me being defeated. mage spells can only be cast so often, you cant cast the spells consecutively. the cooldown isnt THAT long, its only a few seconds, but i could be taken down in a few seconds. THAT is why i need emma's help. she relies on her physical attacks more than her spells, dealing constant damage." i said.
"you can count on me." emma said, smiling "I heard you have always wanted to taste their kind anyway! to be honest, i kind of want to also." And with that said, we were preparing our little family against an army.
Just because my whole shoulder is covered in bruises doesn't mean I can't fight! xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-23
FUUUUU! i wrote me healing your wounds, but i got confused and got rid of it!
FUUUU!!!
pure still wrote me healing you anyway XD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-23
Oh by the way, you should write the fight NOW.
Oh by the way, when James gets angry or sad when fighting for a good cause, he gets stronger. A LOT STRONGER xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-24
I'm writing
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-24
I was laying down on my bed when ahri burst into my room, it was sudden and she sure did surprise me,
"JAMESYOUGOTTALEAVETEREISAGIANTARMYCOMINGAFTERYOUBECAUSEYOURTAKINGAWAYPIRITY'SSPURITY!" she yelled extremely fast, "Turn into a hawk and fly away!"
I smiled and did something she'd never expect, I walked to my window, and jumped out... Then I turned into a hawk and flew away. I knew where I was headed, and what I was doing, I was bringing purity home, to her friends and family. I flew for a couple hours, days really, soaring through the skies until I heard the yelling and wailing of an approaching army..
I saw the campsite and turned into human, of course I was two kilometers above land and the free fall was exciting but as I am quite dramatic I turned into a sugar Glider a couple meters above land and I glided onto the branch of a tree. I watched the camp site for a couple more days, moving as they moved until I was sure where purity was. She was in the main tent where three royal looking people slept. I knew it was her in there because one day I heard her cursing at them for some reason I'm unsure of. Is it really my fault that she is cursing and swearing? I tensed because that not what I wanted for her, but I jumped off the tree and turned into a spider, for I will help and protect purity no matter how she is or acts, for that's unconditional love.
I snuck into the campsite and found the cage they were keeping purity in, I can't forget to give them an extra punch for that. I crawled into her cage and she noticed me and started to try to step on me. I kept abasing her foot and she started cursing again, for I was teasing her by getting close then scurrying off.
"You son of a-" she started before I rudely interrupted by tapping her on the back in human form
"Watch your language young lady!" I teased her,
"James!" She yelled while slinging her arms around my shoulders
I guess I should have told you before but I've still been reading my mothers diary and it is quite interesting, particularly the bit where it shows you every single animal and what they do. There is one particular spell which I will need though.
"Hold my hand and embrace yourself" I say quickly
"Nows not the time to hold hands James" she laughed
"Trust me." I said
She put her hand in mine and I quickly whispered a spell.
"humming bird see, humming bird do,
I will shapeshift now you will too!"
I opened my eyes to see I was a humming bird, and so was purity.
I quickly taught her how to fly and we flew back to the house together, I raised my scared hand and pointe at purity after changing into human again, she morphed back.
I felt dizzy, I think I gave purity too much of my power in that spell
"Oh crap" I thought as I passed out on the doorstep of our house
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-24
I'll wriiteee
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-24
A couple days had passed and I was about to give a FantasyLand speech. Clearing my throat, I stepped up to the microphone and spoke.
"People of FantasyLand!"
I silently cursed myself. I told myself I wouldn't say that...it's too corny.
"Agh, Nevermind that. Sorry guys."
Crap! Too casual!
Clearing my throat again, I gave up and just delivered my message. "Mirror has told me about things in Spirit Land and other places I must tend to. I feel as though it's my duty to aid them...I feel an odd connection to them. You might know this already, but Peregrine-"
The crowd hushed even further. The people on the other side of FantasyLand (keep in mind that FantasyLand is twice the mass of Earth. We accessed it through a portal when we came)
"I don't know if you knew this...but Peregrine is my sister."
The people gasped.
"One of us chose the light path, the other walked on the dark path."
Breathe in. Breathe out. Breathe in. Breathe out. It was hard to remember.
"And I have a suspicion that Peregrine has been trying to haunt these places and the people inside them."
An understanding look fell on their faces.
"If you have been a long-term FantasyLand citizen, you would know. But some time ago, when my mother was still Queen, Peregrine's mother left the Dark FantasyLand and came to FantasyLand. She haunted our people, and massive chaos overtook us. It was a dark period, because my mother was ill and her strength failed her when she tried to defeat her. She died in battle, and from her death I rose."
I stayed in human form, but for dramatic effect, I made my dragon wings appear on my back. Then I closed them back in, and they vanished.
"I have decided to temporarily leave FantasyLand. Cho Li will be taking my place as executive ruler while I'm gone."
Then I made a descision that I hadn't thought of before.
On the spot, I said "and I will be taking my boyfriend Jack Blackwell with me."
Glancing at Jack, his face was full of emotions. Shock. Surprise. But there was a glowing underlay of shining excitement and anticipation. I smiled.
Bowing my head informally, I grinned and said thank you to the people.
Bouncing off the stage and into Jack's arms, I smiled at Cho. She seemed slightly scared to be the new ruler of FantasyLand, but there was determination in her eyes, and she was going to be a magnificent ruler.
Jack and I went back to the house. I led him to my room, and we shut the door because Skeeter was still sleeping. We sat on my bed and I called my magic mirror.
"Mirror, tell me how to get to that bird girl."
"You won't like it."
"Just tell me."
"She lives in the OverWorld."
I gasped. The OverWorld?! That was a four hour flight---in fact, it's the way we came for the dragon migration!
Jack looked slightly shocked at the long flight, but was glad and still excited.
"Four hour flight?!" Jack poked my ribs.
"Sorry." I giggled. He poked my ribs again and I inched away from him, but he just came closer.
"Mirror do you have anything to help us?"
Mirror sighed, pretending to be irritated with me. "Well there is one thing."
"And what is it?"
Mirror's glassy surface turned white, until it showed a necklace. It was simple. It had a black string and a single green pendant hung in the middle. If you turned the pendant around, it showed a picture of the bird-girl.
I stuck my hand in and took it out.
"Thanks Mirror!"
"That necklace is enchanted. When you come near the bird girl, that green pendant will glow and turn red."
I wanted to hug Mirror at that point.
"Thank you so much Mirror. I owe you."
I paused.
"Now leave me and my boyfriend alone."
Mirror floated away.
"It's always so interesting when you talk to Mirror. I wish I had a mirror like that."
I smiled. "Maybe you'll become king of FantasyLand. FantasyLand royalty gets mirrors." This was true. And if I married Jack, he'd be the king, with me as queen.
He smiled and kissed my cheek. "We'll see."
We left my room, and went to wake up Skeeter.
We continued about our daily lives, but went to bed early.
We needed a good night's rest, if we were going to fly four hours tomorrow.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-24
BrookeTheSheep wrote:I'll wriiteee
Sorry I was already writing when you said that XD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-24
tobiii1004 wrote:BrookeTheSheep wrote:I'll wriiteee
Sorry I was already writing when you said that XD
it doesnt affect much. Your in fANTASY LAAAAAAAAND
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-24
"J-James? JAMES!" I shouted, fearing the worse. We just got back. I wanted some time with him when one of us wasn't nearly dead!
"urhghr" James mumbled. Thank god. He was probably drained of power. I couldn't carry him alone, so I went to get Ahri.
Opening the door, I called "Ahri? I'm home!"
"PURE! OHMIGOSH!" Ahri screamed. She ran to the door, and gave me a huge hug. "I missed you!!!!"
"I missed you too, Ahri!" I told her, "Can you help me carry James upstairs?"
"Probably not. We can get him to the fireplace. He will rest there" she told me.
An hour later, James was laying on the floor, covered in bruises.
"I never knew how hard that table was." I said.
"Neither did I." Ahri replied.
We looked at each other, then start laughing our head off.
"We need to be serious. We still are under attack." Ahri announced.
"They won't be here until tuesday, and it is only friday. I heard them talking about it when i was trapped." I said, "By the way, where is Chives?"
"In his room." Ahri said.
I dashed upstairs, and into Chives' room.
"Pure... My baby sister. I missed you." Chives said, kissing my forehead, "I don't know what came over me..."
"It's ok, Chives. I love you anyways." I said.
"I love you too, Purity." he told me, "If you don't want to be pure, thats ok. As long as you are happy. But if that punk breaks your heart, I am breaking his neck."
"I'm sure you will."
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