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So, I had this dream. - skynoms - 2013-09-22

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So, I had this dream. - tobiii1004 - 2013-09-22

Qu3sti0nMark wrote:It's nice, but not my type, like its great but if you want me to like it, matts face gets torn off and tobiii cuts her wrist and slurpie paints a picture of the sun with matts blood, then tobiii dies her hair black and purple and hates the world, mah kind of story

Well this is picturesque.

So, I had this dream. - tobiii1004 - 2013-09-22

skynoms wrote:Image

Gracias. xD

So, I had this dream. - Qu3sti0nMark - 2013-09-22

Well when there at the dinner party there needs to be blood guts gruesome stuff and an emo corner, I'm so mixed up in my body,

So, I had this dream. - tobiii1004 - 2013-09-22

Update:

I'll be adding my new chapters as well as a table of contents to the main post, but I'll still be posting the chapters here as well.

So, I had this dream. - tobiii1004 - 2013-09-22

Qu3sti0nMark wrote:Well when there at the dinner party there needs to be blood guts gruesome stuff and an emo corner, I'm so mixed up in my body,

Well you see, I'm not generally one to WRITE that kind of stuff but I'll...consider...

xD

So, I had this dream. - mattjtv - 2013-09-22

Amazing writing tobi!
I kind of felt like there was some foreshadowing by saying "Blood red" like if Kittens turned evil somewhere in the story and you are kind of hinting at it.
We learned a lot about foreshadowing this year in English, so yeah

So, I had this dream. - Qu3sti0nMark - 2013-09-22

Well at least have a waiter drop there knife on someone crothhäir

So, I had this dream. - tobiii1004 - 2013-09-22

mattjtv wrote:Amazing writing tobi!
I kind of felt like there was some foreshadowing by saying "Blood red" like if Kittens turned evil somewhere in the story and you are kind of hinting at it.
We learned a lot about foreshadowing this year in English, so yeah

NO

First of all, THANKS... xD Second of all...

IM NOT GONNA WRITE THAT SUPERNATURAL ISH AGAIN

AFTER "REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY" I SWORE I'D NEVER WRITE A LONG SUPERNATURAL POST AGAIN XD

One time on the server Kittens was painting her nails, and she said the color was like "blood red" so I just incorporated it somehow. xD

So, I had this dream. - skynoms - 2013-09-22

You need to make a locked thread JUST for your story. And then have this for like comments