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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-22 As I watched the fireball-Ahri- speed away after Purity, I knew I needed to do something. And I think Sparky could help. "Avi!" I yell, diverting her attention from the running figures on the distant snowy hill. She hopped over to me, Sparky trrrrrring all the time. Almost like he was talking, I thought, smiling. "What's up Colli?" Wrenching myself from my thoughts, I say, "I need you to help me-and I'll need Sparky." I explain to her how I need her to help me perform a spell, and how it would help us get Purity back. A few seconds later I prepare the spell. Avi, even though she was a novice at magic-so am I-, I had her help. "Soooo." I had said. "Can Sparks make fire yet? Breathe it on command?" Avi didn't really know what to do when I asked that. So I carried on with the spell. "One. Two. Three." I start muttering magical incantations and so did AVi. Soon we said it louder, so people who hadn't chased after Purity joined in. "Ignite, ignite, shoot out fire. Aim it at our mark. Hit it at the two black men, Go make a spark!" I know, I know, really weird. I thought so too, even though I slightly made it up. But it was working, and I could see Sparky letting out some fire, straight for the two men with Purity. Soon a flame thrower shot out, straight across the trail the men had left while melting snow. We all saw it race across the hills, until we heard a "OWCH!" We were walking along the trail the fire left behind, when we saw Ahri coming back with a tired-looking Purity. She smiled weakly, and was leaning against Ahri. Emma quickly helped her, and we were soon at the house, accompanied by a now sleepy dragon. Avi put him on her shoulders, and raced to her room to put him to sleep. Everyone's eyes were shaded with worry, no matter how happy they let on. Purity wouldn't answer any questions about what had happened, no matter how stupid or trivial. I was leaning on the mossy table, playing with some moss. After the men had appeared, I had felt very odd. I couldn't feel my ears, my tail, arms, nothing. I didn't feel as if I was there. Felt like a ghost. I knew I wasn't though, but something strange was going on. If Purity couldn't tell what happened publicly, maybe she could tell it secretly. To me, at least. I needed to know what happened. Purity would know what was happening to me, I know it. When we had all settled down to sleep, I whispered, "Purity?" REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 NO NO NO!!!! IVE WRITTEN SO MUCH, AND NOW YOUR PART CONFLICTED WITH MINE D: Ive died inside D: I kept walking, my feet frost bitten by the snow. I wasn't angry any more, I just didn't understand why ahri would do such a thing. I've talked to James, while he was a hawk, he seemed to believe I should have went back to the family, but I don't think I really fit in there. Even my brother could be a little naive at times. The last person I've had contact with was Alice. She always seemed to calm me down. When I held her in my arms, everything slowly melted away, but something told me that there was something wrong wit her. I MUST find her. I'm so hungry. I have eaten a decent meal for 8 days. Just frost bitten carrots, and some wild green onions, that somehow survived the formidable weather. That's wasn't remotely close to enough to succumb to my tiger like appetite. As much as it kills me inside to admit it, I must return to the family. It was the only way to survive. A strong sigh, and heavy breath later, I turned around. That's when I saw it. 5 dragons. My tiger instincts have taken over, and I stalk them. There leader was a beautiful color, almost entrancing. What are they doing here? I thought I've been gone for only 8 days... Has the dragon migration already come? After a while, I noticed it. There leader was a girl. A girls with a beautiful, soft voice, and a raspy, metallic after tone. Like that one time with her. Alice. It couldn't possibly be. This is how we were supposed to be entangled with destiny? That's when I saw the two constellations are her strong, metallic scales. It is. It is her. Through all of this, I was frozen with shock. He noticed me. The big one noticed me. He roared with all his might, and made me double over. "STOP" she yelled. Alice, or as now know, Talon saved my life. But why? She was destined to kill me and my brother James or we would kill her. There was nothing stopping her from ending half of the prophesy right now. Nothing. But she stopped them. She changed back to human form. I didn't know what to do. She kissed me. "I'm sorry Mason" was her reply. They flew off. They left me too die. REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 I hate my life REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 I hate my life REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 I hate my life REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-22 OMG SORRY ALICE! I didn't see taht chapter/part! I'll pretend it happened. REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-22 OMG NOT SORRY CHALL! I never saw dat REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 challenger410 wrote:I'm gonna write now And then tobiii1004 wrote:WE'RE HERE! And then GoldenLynx54 wrote:As I watched the fireball-Ahri- speed away after Purity, I knew I needed to do something. And I think Sparky could help. "Avi!" I yell, diverting her attention from the running figures on the distant snowy hill. She hopped over to me, Sparky trrrrrring all the time. Almost like he was talking, I thought, smiling. "What's up Colli?" Wrenching myself from my thoughts, I say, "I need you to help me-and I'll need Sparky." I explain to her how I need her to help me perform a spell, and how it would help us get Purity back. A few seconds later I prepare the spell. Avi, even though she was a novice at magic-so am I-, I had her help. "Soooo." I had said. "Can Sparks make fire yet? Breathe it on command?" Avi didn't really know what to do when I asked that. So I carried on with the spell. "One. Two. Three." I start muttering magical incantations and so did AVi. Soon we said it louder, so people who hadn't chased after Purity joined in. Why guys, WHYYYYYYY????? REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - challenger410 - 2012-11-22 GoldenLynx54 wrote:OMG NOT SORRY CHALL! I never saw dat Not sorry ![]() REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22 Why are you so sad... You know what, Nevermind. I don't want to know. |