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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-22

GemuFoxxx wrote:
tobiii1004 wrote:IS NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGING THE FACT THAT I JUST TOLD EVERYONE THREE TIMES THAT I AM TALON!

ALSO THE SEMI-LARGE FACT THAT I TURNED INTO A PLATINARIA AND FLEW AWAY!

ugh, we will have to fix you XD because i really dont wanna kill you. YOU'RE TO ADORABLE! GAWD.


Tee hee you won't kill me, we'll figure out an ending.

But i feel guilty that it was always me that haunted Avi and hurt her and possessed stuff


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

tobiii1004 wrote:
GemuFoxxx wrote:
tobiii1004 wrote:IS NO ONE ACKNOWLEDGING THE FACT THAT I JUST TOLD EVERYONE THREE TIMES THAT I AM TALON!

ALSO THE SEMI-LARGE FACT THAT I TURNED INTO A PLATINARIA AND FLEW AWAY!

ugh, we will have to fix you XD because i really dont wanna kill you. YOU'RE TO ADORABLE! GAWD.


Tee hee you won't kill me, we'll figure out an ending.

But i feel guilty that it was always me that haunted Avi and hurt her and possessed stuff

Hay Alice?
ya?
PAK THA CA IS HAVAD YAD
Wut
I love you. Wanna know why?
Why
You possessed me and crap :3 now let's play bingo


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

GUYZ! WUT ABOWT TEH BOY AI MET


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-22

SilverWolf101 wrote:Mini chapter extra

Ahri drops her book
Avi picks it up
Ahri?
yes?
what does f*ck, sh*t, and b*tch mean?
Ahri: o.o
Slenderman suddenly screams: WHEN DOES THE POOPLA SUNSCREEN?!

"B*tch means people, F*ck means cut, and Sh*t means Makeup." Ahri says matter of factly

*Later that day, when we have guests*

Avi walks up to the guests
"Hello B*tches! may i take your hats and coats?" Avi smiled
"Ah mah gawd! where are your parents??" The guests replied horrified.
"My daddy is F*cking the chicken, and my mommy is putting Sh*t on her face!" Avi smiles wider.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

GemuFoxxx wrote:
SilverWolf101 wrote:Mini chapter extra

Ahri drops her book
Avi picks it up
Ahri?
yes?
what does f*ck, sh*t, and b*tch mean?
Ahri: o.o
Slenderman suddenly screams: WHEN DOES THE POOPLA SUNSCREEN?!

"B*tch means people, F*ck means cut, and Sh*t means Makeup." Ahri says matter of factly

*Later that day, when we have guests*

Avi walks up to the guests
"Hello B*tches! may i take your hats and coats?" Avi smiled
"Ah mah gawd! where are your parents??" The guests replied horrified.
"My daddy is F*cking the chicken, and my mommy is putting Sh*t on her face!" Avi smiles wider.
Wanna know a secret?
Guests: what?
Theybtaught me those words when I was 3


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

Wait! guests! I said that wrong. My dad IS The chicken and my mom is the sh*t. My mum is Avi and my da is Mason.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-22

SilverWolf101 wrote:
GemuFoxxx wrote:
SilverWolf101 wrote:Mini chapter extra

Ahri drops her book
Avi picks it up
Ahri?
yes?
what does f*ck, sh*t, and b*tch mean?
Ahri: o.o
Slenderman suddenly screams: WHEN DOES THE POOPLA SUNSCREEN?!

"B*tch means people, F*ck means cut, and Sh*t means Makeup." Ahri says matter of factly

*Later that day, when we have guests*

Avi walks up to the guests
"Hello B*tches! may i take your hats and coats?" Avi smiled
"Ah mah gawd! where are your parents??" The guests replied horrified.
"My daddy is F*cking the chicken, and my mommy is putting Sh*t on her face!" Avi smiles wider.
Wanna know a secret?
Guests: what?
Theybtaught me those words when I was 3

Ahri looks horrified in the backround.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

ima eat mom! BLAAAAAARRGH! *bites Ahri's head* YOU TASTE LIKE DAD


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-22

SilverWolf101 wrote:Wait! guests! I said that wrong. My dad IS The chicken and my mom is the sh*t. My mum is AHRI and my da is Mason.


^^^^ NAWT AVI.


REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22

GemuFoxxx wrote:
SilverWolf101 wrote:Wait! guests! I said that wrong. My dad IS The chicken and my mom is the sh*t. My mum is AHRI and my da is Mason.


^^^^ NAWT AVI.

Autocorrect. y u stupid