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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
noooooooooo how could u kill him nooooooooooooooooqooooooooooooooooooo
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-22
I wanted him gone, NOT dead. GET PEREGRINE! MAKE HIM LIIIIIIVE!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
GoldenLynx54 wrote:I wanted him gone, NOT dead. GET PEREGRINE! MAKE HIM LIIIIIIVE!
Yeah. My character is gonna lock herself in her room for a few days now
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GoldenLynx54 - 2012-11-22
In fact, GET ALL THE PEREGRINES! ALL OF THEM NAOW
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
GoldenLynx54 wrote:In fact, GET ALL THE PEREGRINES! ALL OF THEM NAOW
PEREGRINE! HEAR ME ROAR! MOOOOO
okay Peregrine revive now
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
Meta your character is so cruel
" title="Sad"> why does he try to kill and eat everything? (Alice, Sparky)
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-22
RUN.
I bounded up the steps. Wow, I had no idea bunnies could run so quickly...
My ears twitched. Listening. Well, I heard a lot. I heard Avi crying. Probably because it looked like her poor dragon was put through a paper shredder. Ew. Oh, well I should probably comfort her. But not now.
What else did I hear? I pointed my ears out, refining the noises I heard. Ahri...crying? Hmm...I'd have to check up on her later...
What was that! I heard her. Where did it come from?! Silently, I tiptoed across the floorboards to listen closer...I heard...soft breathing. Not hitched and sickeningly sweet like Ahri's. Not quick and light like Avi's. It was...soft. And...and...it was...
Pure.
THAT'S IT. I ran as fast as I could towards the noise. Flinging open James's door, there she was, calmly sleeping. So little and pretty, but such a powerful lie inside her imagination. Throwing my hands on her, I jostled her awake. She opened her eyes and glared at me.
"Aw c'mon. I was having a good dream."
"Sorry. But no time for that! Is it true you think I am a vampire!"
She nodded.
"And how many people did you tell!"
"James."
I sighed in relief.
"So, no one else thinks I'm a vampire?"
"I don't think so."
"Okay good...because I'll have you know I am NOT a vampire."
Not even close.
"Really?"
I'm something much worse.
"Of course I'm not a vampire. My transformations around dragons aren't of that nature."
I'm your worst nightmare.
Smiling happily, I sighed. "Glad we cleared that up. Sorry for waking you. Go back to bed."
But, it DID leave to wonder...wouldn't the others find out who I was, really?
I never told them my third and fourth form.
My first one's a bunny.
My second one's a girl.
And my third and fourth...well it began to be obvious. I just hoped no one was intelligent enough to notice...
Whenever anyone encountered Talon, it was obvious that I was slightly different afterwards.
After all, that's why I've been wearing long sleeves lately.
Talon possessed a dragon. James sliced its right shoulder with his cat claws.
So...I'm hoping no one noticed the deep red claw-scars I have on my right shoulder.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
MINI CHAPTER
I walk into the room with a box of crayons to draw the little egg. Then I see James and the dragon. I throw the crayon box at this face (
) and I kick him in the chest. I peck him then grab my baby dragon and run to my room. I lock my door and push my bed in front of it. well part of my bed."Peregrine? please oh please revive him!"
A tear rolls down my cheek and I silently curse at James. I'm with Alice now, I HATE him.
I make a tiny to do list
1. Throw rocks at James
2. attack James
3. Insult James
4. Taunt James
5. Avenge Sparky
Teehee.lol.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
I also put I sign with a poorly drawn picture of James and and X through his face on my door. there is a note that says "No coming in unless you can heal Sparky"
:3 Avi will probably hate him *suddenly PinkiePie appears* FOREVERRRRRRR
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-22
This has more pages than OMG MAKE THIS THE LONGEST POST!!