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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - tobiii1004 - 2012-11-21
BrookeTheSheep wrote:Quick response chapter-
I have been waiting to see it. My hunch was correct. Alice could become a vampire, and it happens when she is near that egg. She looks scared and ashamed. I walk over, and do the thing that makes the most sense. I give her a hug. I'm not scared of her. Technically, I'm immortal until James... Nevermind.
"You can trust me with anything, sweetie" I said comfortingly. "Come upstairs, let me sing you a song"
I lead her to her room, and start singing my calming song. Soon she was a bunny, and fast asleep. I kept singing, and pretty soon the ENITRE HOUSE was in Alice's room, listening. They were all asleep in not too long.
"Why not?" I think.
I lay my head down, squished between Ahri and Alice.
Finally, some peace.
QUICKER RESPONSE CHAPTER~
I don't know. As long as my suspicion is correct, everyone thinks I'm a vampire.
Vampire bunny. Heh. I like that.
Sadly enough, it's false, though.
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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
I looked up at purity while I was leaning against the wall,
"You sure can sing purity." I said
She looked up suprised, expecting me to be asleep.
"How are you awake." she replied curiously
I laughed, "And why should I tell you?" I asked
"Because... You can trust me?" she said after some thought
"Oh but can I?" I replied sourly
She stared into my deep blue eyes, "Yes." She said it in such a way that I knew I could
"Come with me" I said while walking out of the crowded room, I walked into my room and shut the door behind purity,
"Why did you do that?" she asked
"Because I don't want prying eyes and ears." I implied
She flung herself onto my bed. "Go on, tell me" she said.
After hours of explaining to her about my powers, she understood me completely.
"Ok so turn into a frog!" she exclaimed teasingly.
I transformed into a frog and hoped around the room.
"Oh grow bunny wars, just like Alice!"
Her eyes widened while saying this, I didn't know what it meant but I could sense her uneasiness, I made bunny ears but she wasnt interested in that anymore.
"James, Alice is a vampire, I saw her transform when she was near the egg" Whispered Alice
My memory flicked to mothers diary, Alice crying about the egg. But I realised,
"She's not a vampire." I replied casually
"How do you know James?" She said with confusion, "I saw her"
"Why would she be so happy, I'd freak out if the whole house knew about my powers." I instigated
"I guess your right.." Replied Purity sleepily. I saw her eyes start to close but didn't think about moving her off my bed, I pulled the blankets over her and stroked the hair off her revealing a young, cute face. I let her go to sleep, she'd learned a lot today.
I walked out and closed the door, seeing as the sun was going to rise soon I went down and started making some breakfast, hope they like pancakes. I walked past the egg and looked at it, there were cracks and a shape moving around inside, creating more. Hatching time. I sat on the couch an watch as the little baby dragon crawled out and flopped onto the floor,
"hello little guy." I said
He looked at me with curious eyes, very cute. All was going well until it went bad, very bad. The little red dragon's eyes turned purple along with its body which glowed a dar, purple. The dragon opened its mouth and in an all too familiar voice it said, "Good to see you again james" Talon.
"What are you doing here and why are you possessing a poor baby dragon?" I replied with a sharp edge
"Well, give me your mothers locket and I'll let him have is own will" he replied sarcastically, he knew I wouldn't
"I won't tell you where it is, I'm not scared of you or death" I yelled.
"Oh, but what if I kill her?"
"What, purity? Leave her out of this talon."
"Oh whts the fun in that? She's awakened and coming down right now, feeling the presence of dark magic."
"Talon!" I growled
Purity walked around the corner to see me facing the dragon,
"Oh wow, the dragon hatched! Oh he's so cute!" She said as she started walking towards it,
"Purity, stop, don't get any closer" I replied quickly
"Oh it's just a dragon James, he won't kill me." She replied teasingly.
It wa too late, the dragon jumped onto her scratching a long line up her arm which healed instantly
"um-" I started
"Later!" exclaimed purity obviously distressed
I shrunk down to a cat on got close to purity, talons dragon noticed and slashed out at me, luckily cats are very flexible, I snuck up behind the dragon turned into human form with beer claws and slashed the dragon off purity's shoulder. It flopped onto the floor motionless.
I looked to where purity was standing to see we gone, being pulled away by chives, her brother.
"It too dangerous! Dragons! It's a sick house." exclaimed chives
"No!" yelled purity
He took her and slammed the door, I won't to run after and reason with chives but I realised the whole house was up an looking at me. I could see someone with tears welling up from seeing the dragon dead, a couple people actually.
Where is purity is the only thing I heard before being knocked out.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
BrookeTheSheep wrote:GemuFoxxx wrote:BrookeTheSheep wrote:I'll write romance with my character. LEAVE ME A BOY
ok XD but dont take mason **SPOILERS**
Then James is Pure's.
I get no say in this do I? Eh, I don't mind anyways
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
GemuFoxxx wrote:i have had me unbuttoning mason's shirt, and colli giving james a view of her butt... so i think some romance is okey LOL
WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-21
Metazard wrote:GemuFoxxx wrote:i have had me unbuttoning mason's shirt, and colli giving james a view of her butt... so i think some romance is okey LOL
WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN xD
well, it was a mini-chapter extra XD i even posted a picture so you could imagine it better LOL!
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
Alright then xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
GemuFoxxx wrote:MINI-CHAPTER EXTRA
We all sat by the fire, we decided to play cards, because we all LOVED to play uno when there was nothing else to do.
"We have been getting alot of new guests!" I Say to emma.
"First Mason and James," I gestured to Mason, who i was siting next to
"And then alice, and purity," i gestured to them.
"And now Repaire! will it ever stop? we will run out of room soon..."
"It just means our family of outcasts is getting bigger!" Emma replied
"i guess you are right, they fit right in!" i looked at robby next to me "Some seem to fit in more than others" I said in a flirtatious voice to him. to play with him, i unbuttoned his shirt when he wasnt looking
"H-Hey! what are you doing ahri!" Mason said furiously blushing. I giggled
"Some fox girls just want to have fun" i replied and nodded my head twords colli and chris sitting next to eachother. Colli gave me a sly wink and dropped her cards in front of james, just so she could bend over and pick them up in front of him
"Uno!" Alice bursted out in her adorable voice
"Hey! give US a chance to win will ya?" Purity replied, managing to make her voice sound beautiful even when she was angry. Emma laughed
you have won three times alice! cool it" emma said with a smile.
Hah, it's Chris and James and James isn't even there do it makes no sense xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-21
MASON AND JAMES. you see, i wasn't intending this to be a REAL chapter, just a little extra, sort of like when an anime does an episode that is off topic, and just for fun
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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - GemuFoxxx - 2012-11-21
this was going to be late in the story / anime XD its not actually happening at the time i wrote it, its sort of a peaceful aftermath of all the drama xD
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - Metazard - 2012-11-21
Ok... Did golden even want you to say thy? xD