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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-21
I WANNA WRITE
Going to start now.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-21
Most of the family is by the fireplace. (besides Alice of course) The night seems still and the only sounds that can be heard are the crackling of the fire and the chirping of crickets.
"The dragon migration is tomorrow" Ahri starts a conversation.
"I know!" I say excitedly.
"What do you guys expect to see?" Mason asks.
We all thought for a moment.
"Dragons -w-" I say. Ahri was about to speak when
Trrrrrr Trrrrrrrrrra
We all hear the sounds from the dragon egg. I crouch down low so i can see the shadow of the dragon in front of the fire. The wings are the only thing i could see clearly.
Tap tap
"aaaaw! Hes tapping on the shell of the egg!" I say. I could see a little shadow bounce up in the egg and it creates a small crack on the top. We were all very curious. "Colli! Come in here!" I call out. In a few moments Colli comes in. She notices the crack in the egg.
Blrrrrrr
It appeared to by lying down, so i got up and said "Hes sleeping. Lets come back later"
Its short :3
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-21
When Colli walked in, I left the room.
I went to find (____)
One day I'll intorduce him into the house, then hes mine.
When I couldn't find him, I assumed he went hunting.
I went and found Alice.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-21
QUICK UPDATE- Pure's brother, Chives, should be the one that Emma falls in love with. He is a mysterious person that is lighthearted.
If you want, kitty.
PURITY'S POV (point of view)
Lots of drama is happening. The dragon egg, Ahri and Mason, and Alice acting funny.
Of course, I know how its all going to end. I can see people's bad intentions. By seeing that, and reading body language, I can pretty much predict the future. It isn't 100% accurate, and I try to to pry. But... One person....
James... I can't read him at all. I've never been able to do that before. I saw a couple of his bad intentions when he went after Alice, but after that, nothing. Does that mean he has no bad intentions or...
No. No. I can't consider that. But... His EYES. Those deep (blue?) eyes. They are with him in every form.
I remember those eyes. I saw them.
Let me tell you a story.
My hometown was a floating above the clouds. At birth, we were all given a virtue of goodness. I became Purity then. Some people were hope, or love. When I was 14 years old, the kingdom fell. Literally. It crashed to the ground and DISAPPEARED. I wasn't supposed to survive. The dark guild attacked us, trying to wipe out all good. So, they destroyed
it. We were connected to the kingdom. Its complicated, but basically, when the kingdom was destroyed I stayed the same age. Everyone in the kingdom could die at any time, unless their True One was alive in the normal word. I only survived because my True One was alive. No one else did.
Kay, are you wondering what a True One is? Well, it is the one you can break your virtue with. I could become UN-PURE and be with my True One, and age normally. Sounds cheesy, but a kiss from your True One is what breaks my virtue. I'd have to pick a new name, and i'd be.. HUMAN.
Now the odd parts.
When I fell, I saw two deep (blue?) eyes. Then I knew. I KNEW my True One had those eyes. Those...Those were James' eyes...
Also, you are probably wondering about Chives... "Chive" isn't a virtue, its an herb. Chives wasn't supposed to be born. He wasn't a mistake, but... almost a "misprint" HE doesn't have a virtue, but he isn't human. He isn't fully one of US, because he has no virtue or True One. But he isn't human. Kinda an immortal teenage outcast. Never safe, haha.
Hope I lighted the mood a bit with Chives. He is my brother, and I do care for him very much. He visits me every night, by the big oak tree. He keep telling me about Emma. "Oh she is so pretty, so nice," and sweet stuff like that.
Back to James. Not all True One's have to be one of US. They can be human, or something else
I'm scared of James. Very scared. But... I think he is my True One. I just need to talk to him....
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-21
Importent chappie I posted. Explains a looootttt about me. And Chives
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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-21
BrookeTheSheep wrote:QUICK UPDATE- Pure's brother, Chives, should be the one that Emma falls in love with. He is a mysterious person that is lighthearted.
If you want, kitty.
Sure!
This mystery person is my meal person.
I'm not interested in them.
Yet.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-21
Ok, so you fall in love with Chives, NOT FOR A WHILE, then bring someone in to eat, and, idk, make Chives jealous, then Chives storms out, and tries to take me with him, but James refuses, and saves me, and James tries to make a move on me, I leave in a panic, then he saves me AGAIN and i possibly become un-pure.
WOAH JUST WROTE AN ENTIRE PLOT LINE
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - kittens1234 - 2012-11-21
BrookeTheSheep wrote:Ok, so you fall in love with Chives, NOT FOR A WHILE, then bring someone in to eat, and, idk, make Chives jealous, then Chives storms out, and tries to take me with him, but James refuses, and saves me, and James tries to make a move on me, I leave in a panic, then he saves me AGAIN and i possibly become un-pure.
WOAH JUST WROTE AN ENTIRE PLOT LINE
Mhm.
I introduce...
(____)
I HAVE GOT TO THINK OF A GOOD NAME.
TOBIKSI, GET UR BUTT ON THIS TOPIC.
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - SilverWolf101 - 2012-11-21
kittens1234 wrote:BrookeTheSheep wrote:Ok, so you fall in love with Chives, NOT FOR A WHILE, then bring someone in to eat, and, idk, make Chives jealous, then Chives storms out, and tries to take me with him, but James refuses, and saves me, and James tries to make a move on me, I leave in a panic, then he saves me AGAIN and i possibly become un-pure.
WOAH JUST WROTE AN ENTIRE PLOT LINE
Mhm.
I introduce...
(____)
I HAVE GOT TO THINK OF A GOOD NAME.
TOBIKSI, GET UR BUTT ON THIS TOPIC.
Uhm. What animal is he? Or is it a hooman only
REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY - BrookeTheSheep - 2012-11-21
I say human.
Makes Chives even ANGRIER.