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The story! - awesomeboo - 2012-09-06

Silver's POV, when she get untied by mcman. Kinda a flashback Doesn't count as a chapter number

Before I can ask Mcman anything he sprints away and leaves a note saying "Team Pensi. Come to us if you need help."
I quickly destroy gravel until I get flint and a was about to reach for my pack until I realize, it's gone. Lord Arachnid stole it. There's are to paths I can choose to go through. I go to the right and peek around the corner. I see Lord Nick with the map. I sneak over. When I'm right behind him, I quickly kick him over and grab the map."HEY!" lord says angrily. "Toodaloo!" I taunt as I run away. To make sure Lord isn't following me I get my egg (yes egg) and throw it at the gravel on the ceiling to make it fall. I stop to catch my breath. As soon as I hear footsteps I put my back to the wall and I get my bow ready. I'm not the best at archery though. Read to shoot I prepare to see Guards or Lord Arachnid. But all I see is challenger, tired and worried. "Silver!" he says, surprised. "What's the matter? You look worried." "Golden, she...she drank something, I dont know what it was but it isn't good." "well..." I begin then I remember something. "Uciha!" I couldn't stop myself from sounding worried. When I was about to ask if he was ok, I feel a pain in my back and fall over. Challenger looks shocked and I look up. It was A guard, with a bow in his hands. A puddle of blood is forming in the ground, challenger is clever, and quickly ignites TNT. He picks me up and pulls me over his shoulder. And runs. Everything is a blurr. The last thing I hear is his "META! Silver got shot, I think she might die!" then I pass out.


The story! - awesomeboo - 2012-09-06

Chapter 10

Challenger had used flint (ALOT of flint) to bang through the bars and his chains, soon after I drank the potion. He had run through the passage way opposite the one Lord Arachnid went, racing past dim torches. I had slowly gotten up and looked through the bars. He won't be gone that long... I narrow my eyes. Footsteps echo and I look up. Standing there was Lord Arachnid. "Challenger the Clever has escaped!" I tell him, saying how he used lots of flint and ran through the hallway. "Hmmm... He motions to a guard to get the keys. Lord Arachnid unlocks my chains and smile gleefully. "How may I help you now, m'lord?" I say respectfully. "Go to the cave. Get ready to fight." He says, showing me on a map of the dungeon. I nod and race towards the armor store to gear up. This was going to be fun... When I arrive, its merely a room full of armor from defeated McTopians, that are smelted down to ingots and used to make sets.. I grab a fresh set of iron armor and leave my leather ones behind. I scour the shelves for a bow and quiver. When I get the arrows, I set off towards the cave. They won't see it coming. When I arrive I start to scrape my arrows sharper on a boulder. One perfectly sharp arrow takes off a chunk the size of a baseball. "Perfect. These will tear flesh quite nicely." Meanwhile... "Golden! Where's chall? And why are you in here? We've gotta fix you up! You must be hurt and starving!" Kittens says, thankful I'd been found. I turn around swiftly and shoot an arrow. It tears through Kittens' side and L3GiT ducks under the arrow as it comes closer. Kittens eyes are wide as she falls to the ground. "Gold... NOOOOOOO!" Meta yells. "Oh, you better believe it Metazard. I don't need McTopia now." I say, looking deviously at the sick Awesomeboo the quick. I shoot a dart at her and Awesomeboo dodged the first one, but not the second. She, too, falls down on the stony floor and laugh evilly. Meta looks horrified (he is gonna be the one that cares for me the most) and tells everyone to leave quickly. They had to leave kittens and Awesomeboo, because spiders had heard the scrap from the hall and had moved them closer to the exit into the dungeon. I turn to see Lord Arachnid, showing great approval. I smile happily and move towards the dungeon with kittens. "Kitty gets to go first! I can't believe how easy that was, m'lord. Too bad I have to heal this scrap." Kittens groans with pain and I bonk her head. I smile when she gets quiet and move off towards the room labeled on the map as "Room of Torture." Back at camp... "I can't believe that happened! Why didn't you warn us Gemu! AAGH! Im--I-I need to be alone." L3GiT says ruefully. He stomps off towards his tent and takes it down, and sets of towards the taiga. "Uciha... What did you get done while we were gone?" Gemu says with a hoarse voice. "Oh what? Yeah, I got wood from the taiga and built some huts WAAAAAAAAAY over there." He says pointing to the taiga on a hill in the distance. "Ok, I am NOT walking over there. That is WAAAAAAY too long." Metazard says. "I'll stay here, if you don't mind. And I suggest L3GiT," Meta yells over to him,"That you stay here too." L3GiT looks back, because he didn't go to far because of a snowstorm before they left for the cave. L3GiT gives in and puts his tent back up near Meta's. Gemu and Uciha head toward the cabins that he built in the taiga. "Oh, by the way, I only built one cabin." Uciha troll faces. "UCIHAAAAAAAA!"


The story! - Metazard - 2012-09-06

Good job boo! this is nice and tidy now


The story! - SilverWolf101 - 2012-09-07

Metazard wrote:Good job boo! this is nice and tidy now

NOTHING BUT CHAPTERS HERE. SHHHHHH I'll delete dis now.


The story! - challenger410 - 2012-09-07

must resist temptation to post somthing here!!! AWWWWWW too late <img src=" title="Sad">