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Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-09
GoldenLynx54 wrote:Go over it with a friend for punctuation, because there are several places that need periods or commas. And because of that, the middle part is practically a run-on sentence.
Is this better?
Ps thanks I checked it over and there were places to add better punctuation to.
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-09
Kalashnikov wrote:You're a great guy, honestly. The only problem is, you can be very immature at times. Try to keep your cool more, and not get so angry at people. You play on the server quite a bit, which is good. Also, consider going for Trusted first. Otherwise, Good Luck!
I am trusted XD
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-09
Be more active on the forums
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-09
Ok, I will thanks.
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-09
BTW, that does NOT mean to spam the forums with new topics, or reply to EVERYTHING. It just means to participate in conversation.
People have done that before.
For like a week.
Then they never use the forums again.
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-09
I know don't worry and I won't bump topics either.
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-12
Can someone tell me what I need to do to make the actual application better? I love advice!
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-12
The app is fine
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - zombielover99 - 2013-03-14
BrookeTheSheep wrote:The app is fine
Ok that's awesome thanks Boo
Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated) - BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-14
hahahaha cause awesomeboo